DUE TO DIFFERENT TIMES
STORY BY: BANANA 654321

Title [4/5]
When I saw the title, my mind immediately raced. I was thinking of different plots, and asking myself questions, such as, “Why is it entitled like that?”. And now that I read the entire story, I understood. The title was original, and I don’t see any stories entitled like that.

Foreword [5/5]
Your foreword is really good. You put the ones that will hit you the most in the foreword, which I say is fascinating.

Grammar & Spelling [17/20]
I only docked a few points here because of the misuse words. The confusion between “to” and “too” and the way you use “is”. I understood your story pretty well.

Plot [20/20]
The plot, oh the plot- I really love it! It was really unique- it stood out of all the stories I read for years. It’s really beautiful. It has a strong and