STRANGE MASTER
BY: XIUMINBAOZI99
REVIEWED BY: STARRYGIRL_143 [DRUGON MULTI SHOP]

Title [3/5]
Well… I do say that the title is somehow unique, but it didn’t really catch my interest. When I read the entire story, I didn’t really see anything “strange about the master”. I mean, he normally does what a pet owner does, love his cat, and punish it every time it does something wrong.

Foreword [3/5]
The foreword didn’t really reveal much. The foreword is used to communicate to the readers. Thanking people is nice, but maybe you can add a few more descriptions about the story. That’s basically the reason why I docked 2 points here.

Grammar & Spelling [19/20]
I never saw any grammatical error in your story. You used the perfect words. The only problems I saw is the way you used the punctuation marks. Some were used when it shouldn’t be used, and some weren’t used when it should be used.

Plot [15/20]
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