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Kim Ara had always kept herself distanced away from people because she didn't want to have any more expectations from anyone, except her bestfriend. 

But what she didn't know is that someone, she least expected actually came and planned to stay till the end. 

Foreword

Happy reading! Hope you guys would give it a try. It's my first time writing a fanfic/story so I apologize in advance for any grammar mistakes or if you find this story boring hehehe :) 

feel free to contact me at [email protected] :)  

Cover poster credits to Lisett! She's so amazing. Thanks, girl! :) 

Poster cover by Lisett

Amazing story covers by Puppysmile! :) she's also an amazing girl. Thanks for it!! 

This one too! :) 

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f5sulli #1
Chapter 14: I'm excited for the upcoming chapters
Please make jongin jealous but also have jungkookie moments as well.
I love how it's not too rushed

Update soon :)
Mine95 #2
Chapter 10: Oh god! I'm crying on my bed in my room alone reading this chapter! Its good authornim. Waiting for your next update. Fighting!!!
overshinedrain #3
lemme read this fic
smwriterx #4
Chapter 5: review: the dialogue! I would also suggest combing the short sentences because sometimes it feels a little broken and fragmented. I was reading through everything, but the one emphasized critic would go to the last paragraph. As the ending, you want it to be more of a cliffhanger so your readers will want to continue reading. Maybe you could reword it to read: Our teacher spent an hour explaining what the project is about and what the aim of the project was. She is constantly reminding us about the due date and also told us that the new seat arrangements will be permanent. I swear I can hear all the girls grunting with disapproval. Then she caught us by surprise: we were to have a spontaneous school trip after exams.
good story!
JonginWife #5
Chapter 5: Eh? Is this story is completed ady? :O
smwriterx #6
Chapter 4: review: oh forget about my previous comment about why Jongin randomly decided to walk with Ara
I would like to imagine what Ara looks like and her past (unless it comes up later?)
Also again about the dialogue, but I would like to add something else. Sometimes I'm confused as to who is saying what, so fyi
Never use 'because' in the beginning of a sentence; connect it to the sentence before with a comma, if a comma is needed.
The plot is very cute and adorable, you create the mood of high school students very well. Her curfew is also hilarious.
Good story, I'm ready to read more.
smwriterx #7
Chapter 3: review: well, the plot is cute and good, but I think you should add more information on why Jongin just randomly decided to walk with Ara (her name reminds me of Go Ara btw). There are also several grammatical errors. I liked that you described each of the characters as they were first introduced, but maybe you could go into depth about their visuals and personalities, etc.
Also during dialogue, when a new person starts talking, you start a new paragraph
I hope that I didn't offend you, sorry >.<
lightspot18 #8
Chapter 3: Hey I wish Jongin would talk to like that *sigh* I like your story and I am gonna subscribe :3
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