Chapter 7

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Minah pulled out her hand phone from her backpack. Then she walked towards me and showed me her phone. It's a candid picture of me and Jongin, taken by Chanyeol that time when we were hanging out at the amusement park. "See this? Jongin saved this as his wallpaper." 

"Minah, it's just wallpaper. Maybe the background of this picture is pretty so he saved it as his wallpaper. Nothing else." I told her and I believed it's just that. 

Minah rolled her eyes and nudged me slightly on the arm, "Don't you get it? He likes you. Jongin likes you, that's why he saved it as his wallpaper. He loved the picture, most importantly, he loved it because you were in it, with him." 

I was stunt for a few moments. Jongin likes me? I don't get it, how could a person like him ever likes me? I'm confused. "Are you sure Minah? How will someone like Jongin ever like me?" I asked Minah but it doesn't sound like a question. 

"I'm very sure Ara. Jongin likes you. He cares a lot for you. Stop building walls around you, it's not your fault that he left you. It was all his fault, he didn't know how to treasure you, it's his loss. You aren't born to live like this!" Minah finished talking and came and hugged me. I really need her now. 

"No, Minah. I'm just afraid that it'll happen again. It hurts a lot, especially when everyone came and left me. I didn't even know what I did. It hurts up to the point where I'm getting used to it already. Jongin is a great friend and I don't wanna lose him." I told her honestly. I got curioused and asked Minah when did she found out and she told me just not long ago and that she had been observing us. 

Then we both went to sleep afterwards. 

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Two weeks later, after our hectic examinations, we had a school trip to a camping site. It was organized only for our class and the next class. After all of the packing, I went straight to school to meet up with my teachers and classmates, because we had to board the bus to get there. I have no idea why they are so excited about it. I came because Minah asked me to. 

After I got on the bus, I walked towards the back of the bus and sat there, to my surprise not long after I sat there, Jongin came sitting beside me too. As usual, as soon as he sat down, he plugged out one of my earpiece and put it on himself. "New favorite song, I guess?" He asked. I just smiled and nodded. 

While Chanyeol and Minah were sitting together just in front of us. "I'll just sleep on the way there, I don't wanna see the couple being lovey dovey here." I said it out loud enough for 'Minah to hear. 

She immediately turned back and looked at me, and said "awwww but aren't you and Jongin being lovey dovey too?" I looked at Jongin and saw that he was blushing while Minah was smirking at him. Oh my I wonder why am I friends with her at the first place? 

Then we continued doing what we were doing and later we arrived at the camping site. It was bigger than I've expected and it was beautiful. Teacher Claire brought us, the girls, to the receptionist to check in and to the room that we are gonna spend the night in. As soon as we entered our room, we all were amazed by the decorations and the size. It was so large and cozy-looking. I went to look at the bathroom and there was the bathtub. I could make use of the bathtub when they are camping outside tonight. I do no

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f5sulli #1
Chapter 14: I'm excited for the upcoming chapters
Please make jongin jealous but also have jungkookie moments as well.
I love how it's not too rushed

Update soon :)
Mine95 #2
Chapter 10: Oh god! I'm crying on my bed in my room alone reading this chapter! Its good authornim. Waiting for your next update. Fighting!!!
overshinedrain
#3
lemme read this fic
smwriterx
#4
Chapter 5: review: the dialogue! I would also suggest combing the short sentences because sometimes it feels a little broken and fragmented. I was reading through everything, but the one emphasized critic would go to the last paragraph. As the ending, you want it to be more of a cliffhanger so your readers will want to continue reading. Maybe you could reword it to read: Our teacher spent an hour explaining what the project is about and what the aim of the project was. She is constantly reminding us about the due date and also told us that the new seat arrangements will be permanent. I swear I can hear all the girls grunting with disapproval. Then she caught us by surprise: we were to have a spontaneous school trip after exams.
good story!
JonginWife #5
Chapter 5: Eh? Is this story is completed ady? :O
smwriterx
#6
Chapter 4: review: oh forget about my previous comment about why Jongin randomly decided to walk with Ara
I would like to imagine what Ara looks like and her past (unless it comes up later?)
Also again about the dialogue, but I would like to add something else. Sometimes I'm confused as to who is saying what, so fyi
Never use 'because' in the beginning of a sentence; connect it to the sentence before with a comma, if a comma is needed.
The plot is very cute and adorable, you create the mood of high school students very well. Her curfew is also hilarious.
Good story, I'm ready to read more.
smwriterx
#7
Chapter 3: review: well, the plot is cute and good, but I think you should add more information on why Jongin just randomly decided to walk with Ara (her name reminds me of Go Ara btw). There are also several grammatical errors. I liked that you described each of the characters as they were first introduced, but maybe you could go into depth about their visuals and personalities, etc.
Also during dialogue, when a new person starts talking, you start a new paragraph
I hope that I didn't offend you, sorry >.<
lightspot18
#8
Chapter 3: Hey I wish Jongin would talk to like that *sigh* I like your story and I am gonna subscribe :3
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