Endless Game

Description

Dia is just starting her second year of high school, when suddenly things get weird. Who is this person trying to her into his sick games?

Foreword

 I wanted to write a non-fluff story, so I tried my best xD

This is based on the j-drama: youkoso wagaya e xD

annabloem
Oh My God, I actually managed to finish this :D

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amyfd21 #1
Just finished! It was such a great story, totally captivating and interesting ^_^
I loooooooooove the fact that she ended up with Sehun, the only constant in her life and her actual best friend! <3
amyfd21 #2
Chapter 9: It's amazing so far!!!
yesterdayisgone
#3
Chapter 17: Oh, my goodness! I loved this story so much! One of the best fanfics I've ever read. I actually finished this in maybe like four hours. That is not common for me with a lengthy story. You did really good with developing the characters. And you did make it scary enough. If I was getting texts that let me know someone knew what I was doing, that would scare the crap out of me. After Sehun started acting concerned about Dia, I really started to like him :) Guys really will do mean things just to get your attention. Negative or positive, it's still attention and that's what they crave. I went back and forth about who the stalker could be, but I did guess Minwoo in the next to the last chapter lol. Anyhow, amazing job!!!
Shino159 #4
Chapter 17: Part 3:

ohmygosh i can't believe it's over T^T i loved it even though my head wanted to explode from the mental breakdown and overthinking xD I'm so proud of you for finishing your first long story~!!!!
OHMYGOSH a special shoutout heheheh ohhhh i'm getting shy xD ohhh?? my first comment???? (doesn't remember because i commented so much not on aff only but also chats and real life and all xD i remember sitting in the restaurant and talking about your story xD)
Shino159 #5
Chapter 17: Part 2:
oh bed, they're in the bedroom now, okay okay ohhhh sehun barged into the room and all the way inside
sehun can't save her?? but he's so.... much taller and probably stronger than minwoo??? i think he could try? but police!! yes that's good ohmygosh yes!
wowow where did he get the knife from in his room!??!? pocket knife? :O
ohmygosh noooo don't give him bad imagination!!! i'm torn between keep his fantasy going and get him distracted and don't say it because maybe he'll come back with the thought that Dia actually wanted to stay with him. like after prison sentence and so
ohmygosh it's not illegal?!?! O__O wowww i didn't know that T^T you can get... what's the name?? that street warrant where people can't get in a radius of so much km from you?that's not for stalkers and so?
taking videos without consent is also illegal right???
ohhh i don't trust police officers,,, -____- or it's my crazy mind who thinks this is sequel worthy although i'm going to die from feels if you'd do that. dilemma of wanting it or not xD
Ugghg i love sehun in this!!! he's so kind although he doesn't really want to show it and he's caring not only to her but also to her friends and yayyy
IDIOT DIA!!!! T^T yet i kind of understand where her thinking is coming from
ohhh xiumin's better~~! ohmygosh he forgot..... urghhhhh i wanted him to say sorry T^T ohmygosh ohmygosh.... just... okay i hope he will be a better person from now on... ahhh but i don't like him here xD give me hoya here xD hahahahahah
Oh! Bi ah cameo~!!! I didn't expect that~!
awwww i'm happy myungsoo is so understanding
i think sehun is better for her yes, so why aren't they a couple/ date to this party?!!??!?! whyyyyyyyyy make it official!!!! >.<
awwwwwww AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Shino159 #6
Chapter 17: okay i had to prepare myself to read the last chapter ohmygosh final game already T^T
awww nuuuuu such a sad memory dream :(
OHMYGOSH don't get used to it !! ohmygosh getting knocked nooo T^T
You know, if a lover would say that I would love it but now when the stalker reassures her I only get shivers brrrrr
UGHHHH ITS HIM!!!! Can I say his name or would the comments have spoilers then?? ^^"
YES BE CAREFUL T^T
Wait... how did they meet?? or how did he know Dia?? what what??? did i miss something or is he going to elaborate?? okay i'll read further xD
Lollll who would go to the cute dongsaeng when you have a manly friend that seems to be more capable of protecting xD I'm sorry little one, i'm laughing at you xD (it's difficult to not mention his name ohmygosh!)
ohmygosh he really is scary, oh no i'm sweet i did this and that to you..... T^T
ohmygosh how good does he know her for him to imitate her texting style as well :O or the friends are dumb... or respect her wanting to rest... ohmygosh i don't know what to think XD
Is this a saying?? " When you were forcing my hand." ?? i didn't know :O yayy i learned something new~ ^^
SERIOUSLY I CANT READ THIS WITHOUT GETTING SHIVERS HE'S SCARY!!!!!!!!!!! what are you doing to me?!?!?! T^T
I’ll show you something wait -> I’ll show you something, wait
okay... but he made it? seriously he's scary but so talented he can photoshop and all xD i'm sorry for the randomness xD
Lolll how would his dad know where Dia lives...??? or he is super scary too...
OHMYGOSH EWWWW ERT!!!! where are all the cameras ohmygosh?!?!?!?
wait... where is Dia?? like where did she wake up? living room considering
wait his bookshelves? they are at his house :O ohhhhh but how does sehun know where he lives?? huh?!?!?! I'm so confused i'm sorry >.<
wait how did sehun get the videos so fast??? minwoo has his number???
literaryfailure
#7
this deserves way more subscribers, upvotes & views! your writing style is amazing and i have so may theories!

i do hate you though... for stopping chapter 16 with such a cliffhanger! I WAS SCROLLING DOWN IN ANTICIPATION TO SEE WHO THE STALKER WAS AFTER ALL THIS TIME AND THERE WAS NO MORE! ):<

in seriousness though, amazing story, please update soon!
Shino159 #8
Chapter 16: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU A COMA?!?!?!?!?!?! okay i get why hoya thinks those two things... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i don't know what to say nuuuu Xiumin T^T and ahhhhhh Dia i hope she wins ohmygosh and ohmygosh hoya is such a good friend going with them and ohmygosh poor woohyun and arghhh i hope dia wins ohmygosh myungsoo is probably there for the photography or newspaper club asked him or whatever and arghhh nuuuuu Dia's focus!!!!! maybe she will do better that he's watching like she wants to prove him she's fine and this is the moment she truly is getting stronger, her mind. oh oh she's not more focused..... NOOOOOO
wait... did she call sehun? that's my first thought but how could they possibly have each other's numbers??? wait he's close to the archery too?!??!what's going on?!??!! huh?!?!?!
WOWOWOWWWWW sehun says him, so it's a him so it's not heejin at least
ahhhhh that's why sehun.... awwwww poor sehun T^T awwwww poor dia why is everyone poor?!?!?!?! T^T i can only cry ohmygosh how Dia feels and the sense that sehun is actually making >.<
ohmygosh ohmygosh STOP! wait.... so sehun likes her more as friends but he's so sweet and ohmygosh! okay now i want Sehun XD in this story at least xD
OHMYGOSH SHE SAW THE PERSON NOW!!!!! okay.... i cannot think that Xiumin miraculously woke up i think? or that was a trick too? XD ohmygosh my mind...
hmm sehun doesn't seem to be it and minwoo i think not... i mean he just seems like a good dongsaeng...
at this point i'm really not sure... i give up on guessing although my mind keeps running and thinkingx D
Shino159 #9
Chapter 15: Ohmygosh there he goes again Xiumin and ohmygosh he's like spellbook now with beating but there seems to be something wrong with his head really ohmygosh sorry xiumin i love you but T^T no!
Okay, minwoo is innocent and he's kind of cute like that trying to protect while being a wuss awwwwwwwww
if Heejin had seen that then it was the end for him! Minwoo tell heejin!!! because dia would never!!!
Let's focus on cheering!!! makes banner again :D:D hahahah xD
really sehun.... i can start my whole rant about you again!!!! argghhhh
OHMYGOSH!!! i did not expect that.... wait... how did he just fall right in front of a car??? like on the street and collapsed and too late to cross the street? whats going on?!?!?!?!!?!? nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Shino159 #10
Chapter 15: I can never say this enough... Poor Hoya.. POOR HOYA!!!!!! but i'm kind of glad he shows his weak sides as well actually... not like someone else *whispers*
I love you but i want to hit you Dia!!!!! T^T I understand his side and I understand her side too, I mean if you never saw him as potential then yeah... T^T
There is he!!! myungsoo!! awwww noooo hes taking it hard although thats to be expected with the breakup all of a sudden >.<
arrghhh sehun just admit you're a nice person and only bully for whatever reason you have!!! I still wonder why he started to bully her when they were such good friends and it's clearly he remembers and possibly wants it back!!!! at least that's my opinion, I'm getting passionate about this idea xD
ohmygosh i was sure sehun was not the stalker but looking at it now, what if he did it to become friends with her again in some twisted way?
at least now i think hoya is not the stalker because in the end he only hurt himself somehow by confirming her non love for him, but he may have done something in the stalker's name...? hmmmmm
Again... POOR hOYA T^T
hmmmm donghyun's classroom is close... but i can't remember any stalker incidents in the archery room for now so maybe that was just extra conversation instead of a hint... you make me doubt everything!!!! argghhhh
Lolll xD Dia!!! this time you can't whine if it's about the tournament~ heheheh
I'm so glad she has archery to vent? is that the word? uitlaatklep
BUT VENT TO YOUR FRIENDS TOO OHMYGOSH!!!