This is my first fanfic, so please point out my mistakes. I just tried something hoping it would work, the pairing is LEE JOON/LEE MINHO ( --> BOY LOVE).
Is it strange? Well, I live in the States, so I don't know just a great deal about Korean (Pop) Culture.

Well....Here's a preview of what I've got so far, so if it's crap I WANT YOU TO TELL ME!!! That way I can fix it, or just stop all together. So, COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT!!!

Here's The Preview:

“God Mir, could you not be a girl for like one second?” I said hoping to shut him up. It didn’t. It made things worse, much worse. He pouted, slapped my arm, and giggled. ‘Yah! What’s wrong with that boy?’ I thought.

“You’re just jealous!” I rolled my eyes, “Oh please, why would I be jealous of acting all googly-eyed when I see someone walking down the hall or when their name is mentioned in a conversation?”

“Oh Joonie-poo! You’ll realize how good it feels to be in love, IF you ever decide to let that special someone in your heart. Hey, like that guy you met over spring break,” squealed overly excited Mir.

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Once I turned my attention away from them, I saw HIM again. Coming out of the pool, chiseled abs glistening from the light reflecting off of his tight stomach. Never have I ever wanted to be a water droplet so badly. I think he saw me staring and winked in my direction. I think I blushed because my whole face was hot once he winked.

I sat in the lounging chair beside Mir, when HE came over and started to talk to me. I didn’t know I could get this giddy, but here we are.

“Hey. I saw you staring at me. You like what you see?” he asked in a cocky manner.

‘ YEAH!’ I screamed in my mind. I scoffed, “Please, I’ve seen better.”

***I NEED COMMENTS TO CONTINUE!***

-cotko
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1:23 p.m. (CST)