Title: Silver Aura

Author: trixchia

Story Link: Silver Aura

Score: 84.5 /100

Title: [9/10;]

The title catches attention. Maybe because there are few stories that has the word "silver" in it or whatever. All in all, the title is interesting. 'Nuff said.

Foreword/Description: [6/10;]

What do you mean by Silver Aura? Because I certainly did not get it. I was hoping to atleast see a little definition of Silver Aura or atleast little words that could give me a hint, but there was none. Could you explain what Silver Aura is? Is it a halo? or a what?.

Although I have to say that the story really got me reading because of the silver aura thing. I guess I'll give you points for that.

Plot: [18/20;]

Interesting. Interesting. Interesting. I wanna expect the unexpected ;)

Characters: [17/20;]

I like the way you portray the main character. I find her interesting. So far, the OC is the only thing I find interesting. The rest, are normal. Which is a good thing, because I don't need to encounter Mr. and Ms. Perfect unlike in every story here.

Grammar and Spelling; [19/20;]

I hardly encountered errors and if I did, it's nothing serious. Just a little problem with some tenses and things.

Flow: [13/15;]

The flow is great. There's nothing surprising, yet. So I don't really have a say in this yet, I'm still waiting for the rest of the chapters.

Structure: [2.5/5;]

Could you change the font to something medieval looking? It helps in setting up the story mood. Your font is a fun font. It doesn't fit the story at all. Also, get a poster for the story. It helps in gaining more readers. Since you know, colors and pictures attract readers.

There are a lot of graphic shops around here, if you have time, go and request one.

Here you go, I hope I did not offend you. :)

REVIEW BY: cookiemonster555