Title: Just The Way You Are

Author: Miawitch_1002

Story Link: Just The Way You Are

Score: 76/85

Title: [9/10;]

On a normal basis, I'd say, "The title is so cliché I didn't even read the chapter", BUT... I won't say this to you because:

Weirdly, I liked the simple title. I won't necessarily say I love it but I like it. Eleganté

You could lowercase the "THE" in your title though, but that's just me.

Foreword/Description: [8/10;]

Mmmm, It's about time I see a story with a short description. I like stories with short descriptions. It doesn't spill the beans out and . Just one thing though; your tense switches are confusing. The rules of parallelism. If you started with the past tense, end it in that tense too. Ah... you've changed it. Lemme add another point then.

Plot: [17/20;]

Let me just say that the getting laid plot is quite... widespread already. BUT... I've never really read a genderbender exo story so... yeah. XD

Characters: [19/20;]

I don't know why but somehow, your story got me laughing my out. I love how Baekhyun sees things positively especially during that KrisBaek part (my favorite part) XD. And a Chanyeol huh... Do I need more words here? haha

Grammar and Spelling: [18/20;]

Grammar is good. Are you American? Anyway, there's nothing major about errors but... Ellipses usually have 3 dots [...] and not four [....]. That's the only error I found.

Structure: [5/5;]

The poster surprised me... in a good and bad way.

Bad way, because I was expecting a more colorful poster with a smiling BaekYeol but I got a simple one.

Good way because as I ventured and read through your story, I actually found the poster appropriate for the story. It's simple, just like BaekHyun and I love it just like how Chanyeol loves BaekHyun the way she is. :)

REVIEW BY: DrunkenMaster