HELP (NOT AN UPDATE BUT PLEASE READ, AND COMMENT?) :)

MY FATHER'S APPRENTICE

This sounds embarrassing but I have to admit it, my characters don't act their age right? Haha, yeah they don't. I think it's because this is a romance fic that started when they're still young? I forgot that she's still young, I'm sorry, really. Maybe I should make the feel more brotherly sweet, right? Or should I just do a major fast forward?  Maybe on Mark's birthday? I'm saying this because I've already been asked about their ages a couple of times already, I'm sorry if I'm making you uncomfortable by making them not act their age.. Jesounghamnida :( . I'l try to make it right though, but I want to hear your thoughts first.  Should I make them act differently or should I do a fast forward? Help me and comment, pretty please?  I'll do the chapter once I know what the majority likes... That's all for now..

Kamsahamnida, Saranghae. XOXOXOXO

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HoneyHanie #1
Chapter 21: Fast forward is better. Their relationship has escalated so its understandable.
ParkHyeri #2
Chapter 21: I really think that you should do a fast forward. Considering that Myleen is ten and Mark is only fourteen, it's a bit strange that they act like they're around 16-18.
khayjun-ho #3
Chapter 21: Yah I kinda forgot their age too, but u can fast forward so it's not gonna be confusing to the other readers.
Channinuna #4
Chapter 21: Well, im fine with the story.. But if you wanna make a fast forward for me its better...
70V3LY #5
Chapter 21: Honestly, I kind of forgot to care about their ages because it was all very sweet and innocent :) but if you want to make it more romantic, then you can fast forward a bit to make them older too. ^^
kissmelover123 #6
Chapter 6: Wait is she 10 or 19
KIM_MINAH_19 #7
Chapter 17: Atleast she gets to kiss him -__- lol
XingTuo91
#8
Chapter 16: Update soon :)))
70V3LY #9
Chapter 16: Just because Jungkook is my bais, I'm glad he has a role in this hehe ^__^
KIM_MINAH_19 #10
Chapter 16: Aww,I like Jungkook too but I ship her with Mark!
But it's okay, it's just a date..hehe ^^