Reviewer : Bridget22 || Story : Click
 

Title (5/5)
The title was excellent. It got me curious to what this fic is about.

Originality (3/5)
I can't say this fic is original because it is based on Bo Ya. But the fact that I have never read a fic like this, there was some originality.

Description/Foreword (4/5)
The description was good. It wasn't long but enough to tell what the story about. But I think you can make it a little better. Change a few words.

Grammar (5/5)
The grammar was excellent. 

Spelling (5/5)
The spelling was nicely done.

Punctuation (5/5) 
The punctuation is good.

Diction or choice of words (5/5)
The diction was very good.

Vocabulary (5/5)
Fantastic. I even have to search the definition of few words 

Characterization (10/10)
I love how you described how Henry felt. It 2as nice and descriptive. Although you didn't really described Zhoury, it made me feel like he was mysterious.

Flow (9.5/10)
The flow was great. You didn't rush to it. But I was secretly hoping you would make it longer.

Plot (10/10)
The plot was nice. I have never read a fic with this kind of plot.

Enjoyment (9/10)
The fic was nice. I would love to see the fic a little bit longer and make me feel even more sad.

Overall Score (9.5/10)



R/N: Sorry if I offend your feelings in anyway. I hope you will be a better writter after you read this review. Good job! Holefly you write more fics. And if you wonder why this reviewer is meaner that another reviewer. Then please check our harsness level. Wish you the best of luck~! ^_^