Reviewer : Bridget22 || Story : Click

Title (5/5)
The title was very good. It's simple and gives me an urge to read it.

Originality (3/5)
I have seen a few other fics kind of similar to the idea of this fic.

Description/Foreword (2/5)
I didn't really like the description. The two lines that you wrote gave a big part of what your fic is mostly about and I think the decription of the characters wasn't necessary. Their personality should be described in the story for readers to find out.

Grammar (4.5/5)
There are a few grammar mistake but very little.

Spelling (5/5)
No mistake on spellings.

Punctuation (5/5) 

Diction or choice of words (5/5)
You did pretty good.

Vocabulary (5/5)

Characterization (7/10)
The characters perin the personality is exactly the same as what you wrote in the description. I think it would be better if you show more characterization to the story and not written down like in the description.

Flow (10/10)
The flow of the story was excellent

Plot (6/10)
I don't think the plot is that good. I just don't like it cause I have seen so many fic use this plot. However, you made it kind of original as you talk about the paintings.

Enjoyment (7/10)
It's actually pretty good, but the angst didn't hit me. It didn't make me sad.

Overall Score (7/10)
I just feel this fic is well written but not the best angst.

I'm sincerely sorry if I may have offended you in anyway. I hope that my review will make you a better writer. My opinion might be different than others. If you feel like another reviewer is nicer than me, then you should really check our harshness level. Wish you the best. Good luck~ ^_^