My Brother's Keeper (ch1)

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All children, except one, grow up-J.M. Barrie

It sounded poetic and whimsical to say that he never really grew up, that he was really a child at heart. And sometimes, when Yunho didn't feel like explaining things, that's what he told people. His brother was Peter Pan come to life. The boy who never grew up.

And in a certain sense, it was true. His brother had never grown up. But the reason why was not as romantic as he sometimes made it sound. In fact, his brother had suffered a terrible accident when he was a small child. Back then, everyone wondered if he would make it from one day to the next. And it seemed to be a miracle when he outlived the prognosis the doctors had given him. He lived past the age of six, and proved to be as strong and as healthy as he once was.

But-his mind never fully recovered. Mentally, he was only eleven. An eleven year old trapped in the body of a man, twenty-two.Yunho tried not too think about that very often. It made him mad. His younger brother, he felt, had been cheated on life. And he (Yunho) had to watch it everyday.

-Monday morning dawned cloudy, threatening of rain. But inside the house, the house that Yunho's deceased parents had left him, the sweet and salty smells of breakfast wafted out from the kitchen. Yoochun, Yunho's best friend was cooking. He didn't live in the house, but was over often enough to make it seem like he did. And when he came over in the morning, he cooked. One less thing for Yunho to do.

A light step was heard on the stairs. Yoochun waited. One-Two-Three-THUMP! "Jaejoong!" he cried, "How many times has Yunho told you not to jump from the stairs? You go back up and walk down like a human being!"

He listened and smiled. Jae did that every morning.

"If I could fly," came a gentle voice from behind, "I wouldn't need to walk." Yoochun turned around. Jaejoong was standing in the kitchen. There were days when his looks struck Yoochun. He looked radiant today. Many people often said that Jae's looks had been wasted on a man. His skin was soft and as fair as snow, set off even more by his jet black hair. His mouth was rosy and delicately formed. Sleeping Beauty would have been jealous. And Jaejoong had a smile like spring.

Yoochun shook himself from his thoughts. "If you could fly, I wouldn't need to work."

Jae smiled and sat down at the counter. He looked around. A perturbed look clouded his face.

"Where's Yunho? He didn't wake me up this morning. My hair was really tangly; I had to comb it out myself."

If Jaejoong could be considered the moon, than Yunho was the sun. Jae's whole world revolved around his brother. Often, Yoochun wondered what would happen to Jae if Yunho were, somehow, not to be there.

"He got called into work early, but he'll be there to pick you up from school."

Jae stuck his tongue out. One of his quirkiest habits that he did when he was either confused or upset. He looked at Yoochun,

"But he'll pick me up from school?"

With a nod, Yoochun answered him. And setting down a plate piled high with scrambled eggs and kiwi (Jae liked kiwi with everything) he watched the boy eat.

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yunboojj #1
Plz come back and update this beautiful story^_^.
& Give it a happy ending plz^_.^
sara26 #2
Chapter 33: I miss this story....
shibitan #3
Chapter 33: When i first started reading the fic my chest hurt a lot but lately as the story goes i began to have somber feelings, in the latest update it was a moment i really wanted yunho cry as a way to release his pain, (even though i know tears doesn't always help) i thought maybe it could be a little help for him but it seems not.

About everything that happened in the last update I understand when yunho said he dies, but Aish! he needs help, it's not healthy for him to keep this way.

Dear writer, you really manage to make me feel restless ... and here i am very worried about a fictional character... haha i'm dumb =), but i like it because i love when a story makes my heart throb. Thank you very much.

Oh and almost forgot, i really love when you describe jaejoong's side of the story, despite he is 'the special one' (i mean the one who 'could' be pitied) his world always seem brighter than yunho's.
JaeHoMin
#4
Chapter 33: Iam confused that if ana love jae in love way or just like . Like these updates soooo much . Thanks for ur super surprise . Really cant wait to read the next . WISH to see ur next chapi so soon . The story is amazing and superb
shibitan #5
I would like to say many things, but i'm afraid i could spoil the story for the readers to come (you know, some tend to read comments before the story). So i'm only going to tell you that i'm sad, knowing now all what happened to the brothers in the past.
Dear writer i love how you post more than a chapter in your updates, i hope you can go on this way =)
Ah and i love love love your fic.
JaeHoMin
#6
Chapter 29: Well I must say first I come here because of jaeho tag with hope of find an amazing jaeho story but now I really must to say I was lucky to find this amazing story . You got me stuck on story and finish these chapters in 2 hours . So much though.emotion and sacrifise that it's sometimes hard to believe and expect . Yun's side it's so much fragile. M7ch more than jae cuase he cant show it and no one expect him to be like that . Anyway... looking forward for next chapter . Well done dear
shibitan #7
the last time i came here there was two chapters, only those two made me eager to read more. now my wish was granted (in a great way =)) when i saw there was more than 20 i felt in heaven, so i rushed to read.

i must say i like angst, but this fic of yours... actually i have read only two fics in which yunho suffers a lot, yours is one of them. Through the story i've been more and more stressed, it saddens me to see him so tired, both physical an mentally and so hurt by his brother's condition and the fact he has no help *sighs*, really you have pictured a hard road for him here.

dear writer thanks, it a pleasure to have found this because despite the sad story, i'm happy for reading.
Aniko27 #8
THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY. I FEEL FOR YUNHO. I AM LOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.:))
shibitan #9
Chapter 2: wanting more =)