Yifan's Honest Reviews and Recommendations [Closed. Sorry]

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YiFan's Honest Reviews and Recommendations

"That's not my style."



Welcome to YiFan's honest reviews. Every review given will be honest and not sugar coated. We want you to become even better writers than before! Plus, updates on some of the most well written stories (in our opinion).



Review Request: 

If you would like us to review (meaning critique your story) please follow the steps below!! All of it to be done in the comment section! 

1. Story Title 

2. Link to story 

3. Mini description of story 

4. Reason why you would like a review

Rules: 

(Yes there are rules. They're inescapable.)

One: You must subscribe and upvote *Do not unsubscribe until your review is posted (I know it's annoying but it's so you are updated when we review your story. Though it'd be nice if you stayed ^^)

Two: You must comment once you have read your review

Three: You must fill out the form above (duh)

Four: Do not be rude to us, no matter how harsh you think the review is. We are just trying to help.

Five: Credit us in your story

Six: Must be under 15 chapters; we have lives too you know.

Seven: Although this is your choice, you should make the changes we suggest, wether it would be in your next chapter or you editing. We don't review just for you to read and say, "Ok, thanks," and not do anything. It makes us feel like we didn't review correctly.

Eight: If you do not follow these rules, you will be put on the blacklist and will not be able to request any more. 

That's it for the rules.

 


 

Rubric on which we review by:

Title: 1-5

Foreword/ Description: 1-5

Development of characters through dialog and actions: 1-20

(Includes personality, flaws, quirks, habits *do not use flaws to polish up the better qualities. Flaws are what makes a character interesting)

Plot: 1-15

Realism: 1-30

(Yes, we really stress realism. If it's not there, then the reader cannot connect to the character as well)

Grammar/Spelling: 1-15

Overall enjoyment of story: 1-20

 

Blacklist

No one :) 

 

Recommendations:

If you would like to recommend a story for us to read, leave a comment with:

  1. The author's name
  2. Story title
  3. Link to the story
  4. Why you would want us to read it. 

 

Rules: 

1. You must subscribe.

2. Cannot be your own story.

3. Under 15 chapters (but can be ongoing).

4. Cannot be another review/request shop. Must be an actual story.

5. Can't be a story we've already reviewed or recommended.

6. You must tell the author if we do recommend their story.  

If we like the story it will go on our "Recommendations Page"!!  

*If we don't like the story it won't go onto the list. Sorry~  

 

Staff: 

Looking to join our staff? Check our staff page!!

 

 

DailyDoseOfEXO
Sorry for the long wait. Reviews are being processed once again and we will hopefully be back on track in a week or so. Thank you for all the patience!

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TheDarkLordInHiding
#1
Do you review oneshots?
yoongis-cupcake
#2
1. Title: Broken Crayons Still Colour
2. Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/934102/broken-crayons-still-colour-angst-depression-eatingdisorder-jackson-mark-got7-markson
3. Description: Mark has an eating disorder. Jackson has his suspicions. Jackson is sworn to secrecy, but what he doesn't realise is that the decision he makes could potentially threaten Mark's life.
4. Reason: This is my first "successful" story and I would really like to gain readers by improving it! I'm asking for a review to see what I can change to improve it and gain more readers, since I want people to know they aren't alone <3
[[note: its a work im progress/incomplete, is that okay? haha <3 thank you so much!]]
dyodyopie
#3
1. Story Title: Broken Guitar String

2. Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/765552/broken-guitar-string-angst-drama-romance-tragedy-kaisoo-chanbaek

3. Mini description of story: Baekhyun and Chanyeol are happily married and their love seems so strong that it is seems indestructible. Chanyeol then got a promotion in his company and hence, he got busier. Unknowingly, he stopped giving the love and attention Baekhyun wanted hence, Baekhyun turned to someone else for love. The love Baekhyun had turned to made his marriage life with Chanyeol unspeakable.

4. Reason why you would like a review: Furslt because it is my first time writing a story and I want to recieve different thoughts on how the story is. I need to also improve on my charaterization, many reviewers told me I need to be clear. I want to improve in everything overall. LOL
bts_kimtaehyung
#4
1. Story Title : Blind Heirs

2. Link to story : https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin

3. Mini description of story : I'm bad at this otl sorry

4. Reason why you would like a review : I would like to improve:3



idek why im recommending my own story but okay:p

The author's name : bts_kimtaehyung
Story title:blind heirs
Link to the story:https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin
Why you would want us to read it. : this story will be awesome:3
overdosagexo #5
1. Story Title
包子 (Baozi)

2. Link to story
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/656260/baozi-anorexia-depression-exo-xiumin-bulimia

3. Mini description of story
It's about how Xiumin deals with anorexia and eating disorders

4. Reason why you would like a review
I would like to know what others think about my writing. I really like to write and my ideas come at random times, but I honestly do not really think I portray my ideas well. That's why I would like a review :)
eunhyuksgal
#6
1. Story Title : What Exactly Am I to You?

2. Link to story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/673172/what-exactly-am-i-to-you-angst-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-hyukjae--superjunior

3. Mini description of story : A story analyzing Eunhyuk's love life of ups and downs; with mostly downs. Donghae has been there for him since day 1, as a brother, as a best friend and unfortunately as a buddy. When Eunhyuk finally realizes Donghae's true feelings for him, he is unable to reciprocate it. This story is definitely going to be full of angst and since that's the foundation of their relationship in this story. Timeline is close to current reality.

4. Reason why you would like a review : This is my first ever proper chaptered fanfic and a pairing of the popular Eunhae. Currently still in the midst of firming up the rest of the story so reviews and feedback would be extremely useful for my story development.

Thanks a lot!
love_me_love_kpop
#7
Chapter 6: I just realized I recommended your story! Haha! I see you've been keeping shop. If it were still in mine, it would start collecting internet dust. orz
ArmyExoticBaby
#8
1. Story Title - My Heroine, My First Love

2. Link to story - http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610765/my-heroine-my-first-love-fluff-krystal-romance-exo-luhan-tao-lay

3. Mini description of story - Ever since you saved Lay from some crooks in an alley, he starts to fall in love with you. Luhan is also your lost childhood friend, and also your forgotten lover. What will happen when you get knotted in a love triangle and also fall in love with one -- or both of them?

4. Reason why you would like a review - I would like to know if I should continue writing or not since this is my first fanfic ^^ Thank you for all the effort too, it means alot to me :)
P.s- english isnt my first language
ThanhXuan
#9
Chapter 19: Thank you for the review! I'll credit you ASAP!