Once Upon A Time: Summary

Ensorcellment

Previously in Once Upon A Time... (click the coloured text to redirect!)

 

The king and queen of Sableye had a offspring after many years of trying. The queen wanted to call her little child Aurora, well that is until she found out it was a he. And so they named him Prince Taemin and held a huge party.

 

They forgot to invite the 13th fairy, called Yuri, who was a half-witch. Yuri kind of blew up and placed a curse on Taemin in which he would die when he gets pricked by a spindle on his fifteenth birthday. Jonghyun wasn't able to create a counter curse but he casted a spell in which Taemin would sleep for ten years if he pricked a spindle. The king and queen were so shocked and on that very day all the spindles in the land were burnt.

 

Taemin had his hair grown out to honey brown locks and was forced to wear dresses for fifteen years. He had to live in a cottage by the stream in a forest with his three fairy godfathers; Onew, Key and Jonghyun. He addresses them as 'umma' as per Key's request.

 

On his fifteenth birthday, they send him out to pick berries while they plan a birthday surprise for him. He meets Prince Minho of Altaria while singing by himself and they spend hours chatting. Taemin realises that he spent too long a time out and rushes off but not before telling Minho to meet him at a cottage by the stream.

 

When Taemin reaches home, his fairy godfathers tell him that he has to return to the palace in Sableye. Despite much protest, he has to follow them back. They place a crown on his head and he cries over the fact that he still has to wear a dress.

 

The fairies leave him alone and a green light attracts Taemin's attention. He is led up to a room where an old lady is spinning a spindle. He plays with the spindle and pricks himself and the fairies find him on the floor unconscious.

 

Prince Minho goes to the cottage only to meet Yuri there. Yuri apparently was Minho's ex-girlfriend. Yuri tells her minions to tie him up when she finds out Minho is finding the pauper girl he met earlier in the forest. She chains him up in the dungeon and leaves him whining in there.

 

The fairy godfathers find Minho and make him save Taemin. He comes face to face with Yuri while she's in her dragon form and she snaps at him to fight her. He stabs her epicly in the stomach and the purple dragon stumbles backwards and falls over a cliff, plunging to her death.

 

Minho kisses Taemin and realises that she's a he and blushes in embarrassment. Princess Krystal laughs at him and shoos him out of the room When Princess Krystal finally leaves the room, Minho tells him that they'd be running away and they lived happily ever after in a cottage by the stream in a forest.

 

Until the witches decided to take revenge.

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 2: This was a rather fun addition to the first story. It has some adventure and comedy and magic and romance and all that entertaining stuff. I liked some of the originality too with the fingernail key and I really did enjoy the way you pulled in some of the actual sleeping beauty story line with making the kingdom sleep and such. That was a good idea and while I appreciate the attention to detail in terms of the ruckus in the city, it seemed a little out of place. I had imagined it to be a pretty good and peaceful kingdom. It's definitely possible though so not a big deal there.

The Gnome Kingdom was interesting and it was intriguing, though somewhat off-putting, the way you pulled in other story elements or real world items. The dramas and TV shows were meant for comedic value, I know, but they felt sorely out of place to me. Likewise, it was strange to read Harry Potter references throughout. O.o And while the Pokemon one was funny, again, a little out of place. Then again, maybe the contest called for cross referencing. *shrug*

SNSD as witches was interesting though and EXO as gnomes was hilarious. I don't know how they ever got a reputation for being so awesome after the first day if no one ever made it past the first day (as I gathered from the lack of answers for the riddle - which was a good find by the way), but I liked the idea. The Wizard of Oz reference was funny though the worm caught me off guard.

I will give you props for not shying away from cruelty and brutality since it seemed to be something the witches in particular reveled in, though that was a rather unexpected and scary side of Onew at the end there. >.> Also, I loved the message you were trying to convey at the beginning. It might have been laid on a little thick but it is a good message.

I did enjoy it though! It was another interesting take on a Sleeping Beauty tale with a lot of its own individual twists. lol So kudos to you for the creativity there!
corinneniix
#2
Chapter 2: Yay the yunboa was great!!
-Tigress-
#3
Hi there! Remember that the deadline for story completion is December 8th!!! =)
corinneniix
#4
It sounds good haha... is it gonna have some yunboa? I notice that BoA is also iin the tags haha!!!