Cyborg Theorem

Description

Cyborgs are humans whose physiological functioning is aided by or dependent upon a mechanical or electronic devices. When a cyborg meets a real human once again, will he make a decision where it changes his life?

 

"I want to build a picture-like house

on the top of that blue grass field

Together with our love

want to live for a hundred of years"

 

-Nam Jin: With You 

 

Foreword

Okay, it sounds like your average boring lovey dovey one-shot but noooo, not even close. It's far off.

It's my first sci-fi and BaekYeol story/oneshot so I really hope you guys will like it! It's an almost original idea too because I've only watched five minutes of Tron: Legacy and read only one sci-fi fanfic so any simmilar storyline is entirely coincedental!

Poster credits is to my lovely friend 360ThePokemonTrainer!

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~FlamerShawol ≧v≦

 

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Amalya #1
Chapter 2: This was a really good read actually. I enjoyed Baekhyun's desire for something else and not just the machine world he lived in. Though I'm curious how his pancakes were robot shaped if the robots looked like humans. >.>

Otherwise, the mega memory card disk was interesting and pretty original really. There's a game now that has something like it but I think you started this before it came out. lol Did Baekhyun never have any contact with his real dad in this world? And what about his friends? You mentioned them in the beginning but then we never see or hear anything about them in the three month time span.

Don't get me wrong. I think it was adorable the way that he and Chanyeol got to know each other and started to fall in love and all that cute stuff. XD Just curious about details and such. I did see the resistance is in the woods outside the protective walls which reminds me so much of Aeon Flux! The series was better than the movie imo. Back to the story! lol

I enjoyed your attention to detail in terms of the electricity and the way that they had to drink modified fluids and how things had been tampered with and changed so very much. Also, the point when they get to Chanyeol's cottage was fairly realistic too with his mother's reaction. I can very much see that happening. Did they ever find his sister though? haha

Definitely a warm ending too. I'm glad things worked out for them and did enjoy this overall. Good job!
Amalya #2
Chapter 1: Hmm. Very interesting concept here. Are mechanical partners rather like soul mates in this world? Or are they just preferable to having a human partner?

And in terms of the natural environment being preserved, would you be able to elaborate on that some more? Is it like some tiny section of nature that's untouched or is it a corner of civilization that clings to the old ways? I'm just curious, though that might be answered in the next chapter too. lol
ElementalAndroid #3
Chapter 2: Great story, I want robot shaped pancakes! :(
ElementalAndroid #4
Chapter 1: Interesting so far, I love sci-fis and robots :D
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