Chapter 1: So luhan died at the end ? Or just the roles were changed ?
Hmm one of a kind this story is. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you.

Chapter 1: Interesting. So we've got a weird Groundhog's Day sort of theme going on at the moment. It's entertaining, to be sure, and I rather like their banter at the beginning as the siblings squabble. s. lol

Then things get really different. It was unusual that you had them both be aware of what was happening, though I'm confused if Sehun was supposed to die that day normally or if it's just some weird side effect of the time loop that he dies everyday at this point?

I didn't see the whole gods and their departments coming either. Nor the fact that apparently they were humans at one point themselves. I get why Yixing changed the pattern but for some reason, it felt like the loop was permanent? Although, I thought Chen was just pulling a prank. And how long were they stuck for, since they thought their mom should be wishing them a good day at work otherwise?

Other than the questions, it was definitely a nice little bit of creativity. I haven't seen a fic like this around and the humor was definitely there in the beginning. It gets very bittersweet near the end and I'm not sure how it's going to resolve itself eventually but that's also something to applaud you for. It's not a pretty pink bow ending! haha So good job overall and I liked it. :)