When we were best friends

Waiting room one shots.
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When we started out....…

~ Your Bias point of view

          I remember when we started as friends. One month later we were best friends. We were so close we worn't considered friends in everyone else eyes. Next, eleven months later she was mine. It took me so long to claim her as mine officially but lucky for me she was willing to wait long for me.

         Once we stared dating nothing really changed for us. We still talked the same to each other, we acted the same. What changed was our love grew stronger.It's been 9 months since we first stared going out. We hold hands, have more dates, and time to time we have little nice long make-out sessions. 

       I remember when we started as friends. She was really shy at first. It took me a week to get her to open up to me. She didn't like to be mean and always said the cutest things. She would give me nice little warm hugs when I offered one. She would set there with her sleeves from her sweater on her hands covering . 

       From there we would spend every day with each other becoming best friends before our eyes. I would go to her house and chill or we would go to my house. We both loved to get our moms irritated and yell at us. It would be funny because it was to different cultures disciplining there kids differently. She became close with my family and I became close with hers.

~ Your Point of View

           I love _____

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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3