You mean the world to me ~

Waiting room one shots.
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Authors note :

So this chapter is going to be a little short it is 10:17 here in Sand Fernando/Sylmar California and I usually go to sleep by 9 so yeah :3 and PLEASE NO SILENT READERS. 

You mean the world to me <3

        ~Your point of view

          _______ And I , oh yeah we love each other. At least I think we do, sometimes he spends the night at my place and when he does he always hugs me and kisses me until we both fall asleep. When he doesn't we call and talk to each other all night on the phone till on of us goes to sleep. I always need to hear his voice before I go to sleep.

        Sometimes I think it could be last time I talk to him. Think about it, what if God decides not to wake me up but to take me in my sleep. I cherish every moment I get to spend with him, evan if it's a second or a minute or an hour. The little things about him can make my day. I don't know why, but I do know he means the world to me.

~<3~

~Your bias point of view

            (insert name here) and I, Of corse I love her, she is the love of my life. I plan on marrying her and starting a family with her until we die. I count every day when we are together. From being best friends its been 24 months 672 days and 13 hours. Since we started dating 12 months 336 days and 13 hours, oops make it 14 hours now.

        I don't know what it is that makes m

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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
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#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3