Being protective

Waiting room one shots.
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Author's note:

So hey I am back :3 This one is going to

be a little weird.

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Being protective ~

 

 

______= bias

 

(_____) = you

(b/m) = bandmate

 

 

 

~With ______ and his band


 

"So how would you feel if you and (____) were shopping

and some random guy went up to her and straight up hit on her

right in front of you?" (b/m) asked ____. 

"Well,I think of her as "Mine" SO then I would kill to protect her and

whats mine." ___ replied. "What if it was me ?"

(b/m) responded. "Then it looks like (__ group name) has one less member."

 

"hahah very funny (-_-)." "hey wait how do you plan on protecting ___

If you don't evan see a lot?" another (b/m) asked?

"I do what I can do" ___ said. "what does that mean (b/m) asked. "it

means that when I am with her I charish her and

protect her in every way I possibly can." "Ewww chessy alert!" (b/m) 

screamed. "THEN WHY DO YOU EVAN ASK?"

____ asked? " " I didn't hyung did" (b/m) said pointing at the other 

(b/m). (/_-)

 

~ With you and your friends

 

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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3