We are so silly

Waiting room one shots.
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Authors note: 

Sorry for the long hatious my computer like

Malfunctioned ! But i'm back :)

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We are so silly

 

 

______= bias

(_____) = you

 

 

 

 

It was one of those nights were you and ____ were at your place watching

Movies, playing video games and all your guys favorite thing to do.

Not in your intention, it was very late. It was time for ____ to go home. 

Yet, like always, ____ had something else in mind instead

Of going home. He was going to use the time of the day against her so he 

Can have his way like always.

 

" Hey babe its pretty late shouldn't you go home?" you asked. "But 

jaygia it's late and dark and scary outside what if someone tries to steal me!" He 

Responded. "Trust me ___ they well bring you right back"

"Fo reals though just me stay the night with you, I still have extra clothes from 

Practice, Pwease," ___ said with the cutest puppy face.

"Fine you can stay," you gave into his cute adorable face. "Well, lets got sleep jagiya!" 

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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3