Christmas Special

Waiting room one shots.
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 Authors note:

Ok sorry for not updating in a while finales and holidays where crazy so here we go :3

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Christmas Special 

            ______= bias (_____) = you           ~Two weeks before                            "Come on babe just tell me what you want for christmas," _____ said while interrupting your studying time. "_____ , I already told you all I want is you," You replied.             "You already have me !" "See babe your already one step ahead of the game," You replied to him while putting away your biology book.           "Come on I am serious!" "Haha I thought you were _____," you replied to him while grabbing your study guide. "Ha your so funny I forgot to laugh," ____ said with a frustrating tone.              "Look if your going to be like this why am I even here," ___  said while collecting his things. You immediately grabbed his arms and said "Wait, i'm sorry I didn't know buying me a gift was one of your top priorities right now." "Whats that supposed to mean?                 "Not in a mean way but in a worried way." "What," He asked me. "Like you are super busy with work during this season, I thought that buying gifts for christmas was last on your to do list."             "I see what you mean but come on, this is our first christmas together, I want to make it a special as possible." "well you have a schedule on christmas so good luck doing that."                     "Aww babe you memorized my schedule for me," ____ cooed. "No it's right her on the fridge." "Way to kill the moment   -_-."     ~One week later  ~Bias point of view                   "What do you mean you don't know what to get her," one of his band mates said. "She likes everything I get her so how am I supposed to know what she like," bias replied.                          "Just ask her," another band mate said. "You don't think I tried." "Well she told me she likes things with sentimental values," one member who was really close to you said.               "Sentimental value, hmm I think I have something in mind."     ~
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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3