That kiss on new years !

Waiting room one shots.
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IT'S NEW YEARS, 

KISS ME !

 

 

 

 

 

______= bias (_____) = you                  This was it, New years is finally here. You were super excited because it was your first new years with him. Not only were you happy that hey got the day off from         his schedules but you were going to have your first new years kiss.                           You have never experience that perfect first kiss of the year before. Your friend always boasted about their first new years kiss and how it was so magical and sparks flied. You told your self it was going to happen this year with ___.               You practiced allot on your kissing by pitting an apple or the frosting of a cupcake just in case tongue was used. Most of all giving ___ surprise kisses. It didn't bother him but if he knew he would differently took advantage of the situation.   New years is two days away so you had to get in as much as you can...   ~<3~     ~Your point of view                   "This is it, my target in sight, no movement at all, 5 feet distance, facing forward sitting...... and go!" I though in my head as I stood in back of ____ who was sitting on the couch.  I ran towards the couch and rapped my arms around his neck and kissed him on the lips sweetly.         "Dear lord you scared the handsome out of me," he mumbled while catching his breath. "Oh please like that is evan possible," I said while pecking his lips quickly again. "I know, but hey," ___ said as flipped me over the couch so I was laying on his lap. "whats with all these surprise kisses huh," He said as he kissed me softly.         "Not that I am complaining or anything but it came as a shock," he looked at me deep in the eyes. I responded with a nervous look, "Well my new years resolution is to show more love and affection towards you!" "But we have
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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3