We are best friends

Waiting room one shots.
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We are best friends

~Your point of view

              You see that guy getting scold at by his mom for not visiting her often. Thats my best friend _____. I find it hilarious that this guy can still get in trouble by his omma at our age. He can be such a dork at times. A cute, handsome, dumb, dork. I think you can tell my feeling for him are stronger then best friends.

              It's been a year since we've known each other. If you send most of your week with him you would understand why my feeling for him are so strong. The way he hugs me, they he comforts me or tries to make laugh when I have a bad. He is a gift sent from God, A guardian angel.

         I always wonder if he see's me more then as his "Best friend". I wonder if he thinks about me before he goes to sleep. I think we could have a chance. Just like in the movies when you see the two best friends found love between them without even knowing. But then I fell like he could see me as his little sister.

             What would happen if he got married to some girl and I was the best man (woman). What happens if I have to take care of their kids while they go on trips and make love. That would kill me, it would stab my heart everyday. Just then I woke up from my little day dream when I heard "ALRIGHT OMMA !" 

         They had just finished their little argument. It was always so entertaining to see _____ make a smart remark at his mom and pay for it with a slap on the back of the head. ______ Does it on purpose to. I don't know why really...

~ Your bias point of view

      Here it comes the big slap behind the head. Oww, it's worth it because it makes (insert your name) laugh. It kinds seems mean right to laugh at your best friend get yelled at by the mom. Well, not for us, I laugh my but off when (insert your name) grandma

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SharonTheImaginator #1
Chapter 14: First of all, I really like you're writing because it's subjective. Plus, you can tell the different styles of words different povs use so that's great! What I think you could improve on is your grammar errors, sometimes writers tend to forget to check their writing but it's okay! Other authors make these mistakes as well! When writing a long block of a fanfic (lmao) you should also focus on the surroundings, the description of the place or their movements that tell the readers how the charactera are feeling. (Are they nervous? Scared? Excited? They have different reactions to each feeling)
But I want to say I love that you write a lot of thoughts, so readers are always aware of where the characters are going in their heads, so that's really good.
Good luck on your fanfic!! :)
KISSmeSooVin598
#2
Chapter 12: Awh... I can sense that Kevin, Soo Hyun, Dong Ho (and probably Eli) playing in this play >. <

Nice story, Author-nim
MinMiShine94 #3
Chapter 6: hehehe that seems realistic to me because minho and me are both competitive soo... haha aaaaaaaaw that was really sweet and cute keke XD where is that giant frog when I need him haha :3
MinMiShine94 #4
Chapter 5: awwwwww that's cute your stories are making me wish I had minho with me now yeobo I miss you T.T
icephoenix13 #5
Chapter 4: Adorable!!
MinMiShine94 #6
Chapter 4: awww that was cute XD
aplus_
#7
Chapter 1: Awwww this is so cute! *.* can't wait for the next One Shots, good Job! (Y) <3