- WINNERS: Round 1 -

Writing Down the Bones {CLOSED FOR JUDGING}

        

~ Winners ~

 

Congratulations to all the participants!! I really enjoyed reading and reviewing the stories you submitted for Round 1 of this contest. I hope you will all continue to hone your skills and become stronger and stronger in your writing! There were some amazingly talented and creative entries, and it was very difficult for me to decide on the winners but, after much deliberation, I have decided that the following were an inch above the rest: 

 

 

Winner #1 - First Place: 

Journal” by xxxyxxx

This story was powerful in very subtle ways. With its perfect pace and characterization, Journal is a complex, emotional read. The author shows  careful patience with the story, providing us with small, honest, beautiful stills of the two main characters and those who are impacted by their lives. Rarely do I come across a character so compelling without that character actually having a physical presence. There was a real sense of haunting in this death themed fic that lingered with me days after I read it. This story is really Key's more than Taemin's, and without such strong characterization, would have had less impact than it did. Key's persona is so compelling that he almost takes on a life beyond the fiction itself. Devastating and endearing, moving... Key's diary entries are the heart of this story, and we are surrendered to its wonder just like Taemin is throughout the text. Journal is complex on many levels, and full of parallels: a ghost love-story of sorts, a magical tragedy that will leave you under its spell until the very end.  

(read my review here)

 

 

Winner #2 - Second Place: 

Roads” by Shawol360

This story stood out to me as a winner from the very beginning. Each time I read it, I only became more convinced. Original and unique, brief and honest, this fic says so much with very little, bravely taking on a modern spin to the death and rebirth theme. There is an authenticity to the characters, a real  and honest struggle that many face in their daily lives. With one of the most startling yet perfect endings I  have read in a long time, Roads presents a different perspective to what it means to have to die in order to live. This story was not what I expected it would be, in the most pleasantest of ways, and I can't recommend it enough. 

(read my review here)

 

 

Winner #3 - Third Place: 

Glow. Electricity. Life.” by ChiaKairi

Because this story affected me on a personal level, it was an entry I could not forget. This take on rebirth was a highly creative one, a cerebral and surprisingly poetic journey that left me speechless by the end. Some of the lines in this fic stand out like solitaty poems, strung together through a common thread. With its sense of timelessness, patience and gentle tone which fit the theme and setting, Glow.Electricity.Life refuses to indulge in bianaries, instead stripping away definitives and stereotypes in order to get to the heart of what is at humanity's core.

(read my review here)

 

 

Congratulations!! I will be sending your karma prizes within the next 48 hours!

I look forward to seeing you all in future rounds!

 

 

(With the exception of the winners listed here, I will be cleaning up the first round entries to make way for the second. Please save your reviews if you wish to keep them.)

 

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Isadora_Quagmire
#1
Chapter 17: Tq. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was only produced because of the lovely prompt, so you must take some credit here <3
ChiaKairi
#2
Chapter 10: Thank you so much for everything unnie! I'm glad you liked the story and I'm so happy you think I'm improving ;3
Yes by the way, Jonghyun red his essay to Taemin at the phone.
Have a nice day and thank youuuu
heartykeykeke
#3
Chapter 16: Thank you for the detailed review! It's not as critical as i expected haha. I'm glad you didn't tear it apart. I have an urge to go back and change all of it but i know you don't think that's right. I'll go check errors in spelling and punctuation and delete some ly words. I know i still rely on that too much. But i use less adjectives and less adverbs than my stories 2 years ago now I'm conscious of it. In future stories i will work on being more direct. I will definitely keep in mind what you suggested about syntax in the future if and whenever i continue writing. It's gotten harder these days. I have ideas but I'm never satisfied with the way i write now. I think being so concerned about correctness and style has gotten me to lose some of my own way of writing. I don't want to just imitate others you know? Because i think i have my own style that works when i just wing it without much thought or pressure. Being an English teacher is blocking me i think haha. Anyway some things you commented on i can't promise to change. Because there's also more personal opinionated contents. Like i disagree with comments about feminism and too much emotion but we could talk for days about that. We both have our own interpretations and i personally prefer to read things in that fashion than the way you sometimes portray homoual relationships. You know i like things more romanticized and it's something i won't change. Because i believe there are many men that are more effeminate and emotional and romantic. That's how some are i know tho not the majority. so sorry to say if you read anything else from me it won't fully suit your taste. Maybe it's connected to hormones and personality that were different that way? Haha

I had a question that's bugging me tho. Are you supposed to put commas between averages or no? Because i didn't before. Then a grammar book said i should. now you say not to. So confusing
Isadora_Quagmire
#4
Chapter 15: **swooning because compliments x 1000** you are extremely kind and I thank you for your guidance. Will work on it and someday present you with a better version.
kagaki #5
I'm tempted to join Rounc 3, but would it okay even though I never participated before?
AffxtedShawol
#6
Chapter 14: Thank you for reviewing it. I'll let Shawol360 know~
SimplyAsian #7
Chapter 13: Thank you so much for the review!!! I will keep these pointers in mind and use it to improve my writing. I struggle with keeping the same tense but now that I have a guideline and and example of what's right and wrong, hopefully I can improve next time. Now that I think of it, Jonghyun killing Key for immortality does sound absurd lol. I should've justified why he killed them and his motif for doing what he did. One thing that took me by surprise is the thing you said about Taemin knowing more than the reader realizes. I didn't intend for Taemin to appear that way but now that I think of it, it does seem that he knows something we don't lol. I didn't realize that there could be a different interpretation on something, depending on how the message/actions is delivered by the character. Anyways... thanks again. I'll try to revise more. Your review is really helpful.
heartykeykeke
#8
Heartykeykeke
Profile, but prob not necessary: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/21179
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/801582/unattainable-action-drama-jongkey-romance-shinee-slightangst-auzorro

Title: Unattainable

Star-crossed love prompt

review he.ll yes!

this was completed before i submitted it but that's just cuz i was lazy to do this. I did write it after being inspired by this plot and some other things like Key's awesome sword play in his musical. Hopefully people start submitting. Maybe it needs to be advertised again. Well
..loves ^^ hope all is going well or better for you!