My First Love Went A Little Like This

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HELLO MY DEAR READERS!! =)

              I'm sorry to say that I edited this story >.< I'm sorry if I decided to change it in such a short notice. Well, I'm thinking that If i changed some parts in this story, it will turn out good. I'm not saying that I'm a good author because I know to myself that I am not. I hope you will still support my fic even if I changed it.

               So I was thinking that if you had read this story. Its best if you read it all over again because as I've said earlier, I'm going to edit some parts of the story, it would be a lot more easier if you read it again ;) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING & CONTINUOUS SUPPORT! :>

THE REAL DESCRIPTION OF THE STORY.

Okay, so this is the REAL DEAL:

 This story is about  a senior high school girl who is studying in this elite and famous school in Korea and she is not just the typical and average girl. In fact, she is very famous and known to all Korean citizens out there. She's known for being one of the best young designers and models in Korea, for being a very talented girl when it comes to singing, dancing and acting, for being able to catch up with her lessons despite the fact that she is very busy with her career, and for being so humble and kind to people especially to the young ones who idols her so much. Even she can't believe that she became that popular and successful. Everything is going smooth according to her way.

She is almost contented with her life, with her family, friends, and other relatives. The only thing missing in her life is LOVE. Ha Ra is in love with someone who doesn't even know her. She can't believe that she is not noticed by the guy she loves. There are a lot of guys who wanted to court her or go out with her, but she rejected them all, because she only wants him, to be by her side. The one and only love of her life since the day she met him.

And when the day comes, she realized that she's finally contented until she witnessed a very depressing event in her life. She then confides to her mom for her very first heartbreak. Her mom tries to comfort her, then taking us to another story. (A/N: I'm hoping that you won't get confused by the story! :D)

**This is my very first fan fiction in AFF and I'm hoping that you can bear with me. I'm sorry if there are errors in grammar and for the mispelled words. Everbody makes mistakes :P


I've changed my Fiction's Ratedness =))) ITS NOT RATED ANYMORE =)))

*Rated for bad words and such. But I can't promise that I can't put bad words here :P


CHARACTERS:

*Lee Ha Ra

  • 16 years old.
  • The "Almost" Perfect Lady in the "Elite School Of Seoul, Korea".
  • She is the second child of her umma and appa, making her the heir of one of their business/company, The Paperdollie Inc.
  • She is very famous in Korea and many adores her beauty and brains. But There is still something missing in her life, her one and only love.

*Im Yoona

  • Ha Ra's childish (she acts like one sometimes) umma. But she is the BEST MOM you'll ever imagine.
     
  • She is loving, supportive, caring and understanding umma to Ha Ra.
     
  • She is always there for her daughter even though she's kind of busy (but she works in their mansion).
     
  • She never fails to make her daughter feel better evrytime she's upset.
     
  • She is also a designer and a model as well of their clothing line company.

*Ha Ra's Appa

  • *identity will be revealed as the story goes on*

(A/N: I'm sorry if I can't tell you the who's the appa. If you're curious about him, then you HAVE to continue reading my fiction >:) )
 

*Kim HeeChul

  • 18 years old.
  • Ha Ra's older brother.
  • He is very supportive, loving, caring and protective of her one and only sister.
  • He is always there for Ha Ra especially when their parents, specifically their mom, is not around.
  • He also treats SooYoung as his own dongsaeng.

*Choi Sooyoung

  • Ha Ra's bestfriend since they were in their diapers.(A/N: Its a good thing that they are not getting tired of each other.)
  • She has a secret crush on a boy named Changmin.
  • She is shy, dorky, clumsy and love to eat a lot!
  • She always nags at Ha Ra (sometimes worse than Ha Ra's mom) but she can totally rely to her when Ha Ra's having a hard time when it comes to her lovelife.

* Minho & Yuri

  • SooYoung's Parents.

*HyoYeon & EunHyuk

  • SooYoung's Siblings.

* Onew & TaeYeon

  • Ha Ra's uncle and auntie.
  • Ha Ra's Appa's hyung.

*DongHae, KyuHyun & SeoHyun

  • Ha Ra and HeeChul's very close cousin
  • Children of Onew and Hyoyeon
  • Very famous artists from their entertainment.

*Key & Sunny

  • Yoona's big brother and little sister.
     

*Dara & Siwon

  • Key and Nicole's children
  • Ha Ra's close cousins too.

*Kim Jaejoong

  • Ha Ra's love since they were in gradeschool but he's not aware of it.
  • He is known for his perfect features and chocolate abs. He is a total package since he's smart, he can dance, sing, play an instrument and even do sports!
  • He is a member of the famous boy band called, Dong Bang Shin Ki or DBSK.
     

*Shim Changmin

  • He always brings his DSLR (camera) everywhere he goes.
  • He has a secret crush on Sooyoung and no one knows about it but him!
  • ( A/N: He admires her brave soul and her cute face whenever she eats with full.)
  • He has this scrapbook full of Sooyoung's cute stolen pics and keeps it under his pillow.
  • A very supportive dongsaeng to his groupmates/ hyungs.
  • Jaejoong's best bud.

*Kim Junsu, Jung Yunho, Park Yoochun

  • Jaejoong and Changmin's brothers.
  • Their group is like the "Flower Boys" in their school.
  • They are also perfect like Jaejoong and Changmin.
  • They treat each other as real brothers.
  • They always got each others back and supports each other.
  • Member of the boyband called, DBSK.

* Hwang Tiffany and Jung Jessica

  • The antagonists of the story.
  • They are also known for their beauty and power.
  • They love to get attention from people.
  • But not all the students adore them anymore because Ha Ra always gets the attention (though she didn't ask for it) and gets threatened (A/N: Since their throne is taken away by Ha Ra.)
  • They planned something that will make Ha Ra destroyed, because they will do anything just to get what they want.

(A/N: I'm sorry If I made Jessica and Tiffany look bad here. I just think that they fit their roles in the story. No offense intended! I'm sorry again, no bashing please! JSYK, I SO LOVE JESSICA AND TIFFANY.) 

*SHINee- Ha Ra's Appa's friends/brothers. *I think i just gave you an idea of who will be Ha Ra's dad*.

 

(A/N: I know >.< I have lots of characters. but don't worry. Not all of them are going to be in my fic, I mean, all of them are going to be in the fic but not all of them are having the MAJOR roles, some are just extras. I just stated and completed the family tree of Ha Ra. And this is just our base or reference of the family tree. So tonight, as you can see, this is the only part that I have edited. I'm going to edit the succeeding chapters as soon as possible. And I'm going to update after I have sort all of the things and fixed the problems and errors in this fic. I hope you guys understand me. Keep on supporting my first fic! Saranghaeyooo~~)

Foreword

 

"Umma, did you also experience this?" Ha Ra asked, while wiping the tears coming from her swollen eyes.

Yoona cupped her daughter's face and gently held her with soft hands.

"Yes of course dear." she assured her. Then smiled at her crying daughter.

"Really umma? Who is he? What happened? How did you handle all of this stuff? Can you tell me the story? PLEASE?" Ha Ra's eyes glistened with curiosity and showed her puppy dog eyes despite the fact that her eyes are still swollen.

"I don't want to!" She shrieked. They were both surprised on how her mother reacted. That epic reaction that she first saw after almost 17 years of living.. "Well, i want to, but....." she suddenly trailed off. " And It's kind of embarassing."

Her mother instantly blushed as she remembered her love story and trying hard to hid her face from her daughter's watchful eyes.

"But umma...." she made a face and started to pout cutely. "This might help me forget about Jaejoong even just for a while." She said sulkily and showed her puppy dog eyes again.

 

 

"FINE! But baby, you have to promise me first that you will not tell this to anyone!" she told her daughter. "Even to your Appa!!" She warned.

"I Promise umma." She said and smugged knowing that her loving mom can't resist her.

"Well, my first love went a little like this......"


DISCLAIMER:

i don't own any character except Lee Ha Ra ;)

*If my story has the same plot as yours, i'm sorry but i didn't intentionally copied yours. Its just a coincidence. Thanks for reading my fic!

 

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aetherius
#1
Chapter 9: please update soon <3
love how heechul is just awesome and i wish i had an umma like Yoona XD good luck on this fanfic and your computer class!!
FluffyGoldenPancakes #2
Chapter 9: Update soon pwease authornim!
jhoy24
#3
Chapter 8: update soon please^^
i like your story^^
_shinboo_
#4
I just finished reading it and I'm really loving every chapter so far, hope you continue updating this :) I followed you on twitter too btw ;).
Good luck :)!
pinpalls
#5
Wweeeeee ! :))
beagull
#6
LEE RESIDENCEEEE!!! HeeChul Oppa is such a loving oppa!!! Argh, I wish I have a brother like that -.- and Ahjumma YoonA, Jaejoong is not gayyyyyy. He is just, What HeeChul
Oppa said! hehehehe! Dear Author, I would like to say I have one objection in this fan fic... KEY & NICOLE. ANDWAEEEEE :( KeyBer (Key & Amber) is much more acceptable. And if you would
like to change I am grateful. If you don't want to, then it's okay. But I totally love this fic!
Update soon ^_^
youknowthegirls #7
Okay, I totally know the appa xDD<br />
update soon^^
miaaigoo
#8
One more thing...<br />
Lee residence<33
miaaigoo
#9
I LOVE HEECHUL<3<br />
Uh-oh. Jaejoong IS not gay, Yoona. :D HAHHA<33