Chapter 8: Woah, Yixing and Luhan.....with a face like that......you guys are not cut for killing anybody lol. Awesome story author, but can you please fix on "he's" and "his"? Ot gets kinda confusing though. "His" is for posession, while "he" is used as subtitute subject. Yeah, mini lecture from me kekekeke. Good luck for your next fic!
Chapter 6: OMFG I KNEW LAY AND JONGIN WERE THE BAD GUYS OMFG The moment Lay whispered to take the child and not tell Kris I knew something fishy was going on and then when Kris found the pic of Lay & Chanyeol I was like, "omg what if Lay liked Chanyeol and tried to kill Kris because he wanted Chanyeol and then told Chanyeol that Kris had died so that they couldn't get back together and Jongin was Yixing's side man?!" AND LO AND BEHOLD I WAS CORRECT OMFG
I just hope that Yixing didn't follow Kris to see where he was going and sees him with Chanyeol and then tries to kill both of them at the same time. ;A;
Someone needs to get rid of Yixing, Luhan, and Jongin omfg I don't like these three omfg >___<
Awesome story though! Update soon! :D
Chapter 6: OMG Lay how can you be so evil? :( Please Lay come to your senses. He is your brother!!!!! Stop messing around and let Kris be happy with Chanyeol and Eun Seok.
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