ღ Review | Silent Moments

rєvíєwєr: Myungiesshi

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ღ Title(2/5): The title 'Silent Moments' doesn't really relate to the genre or the topic of your story. What do you mean by 'Silent Moments'? The story is about gangsters. I would understand the relation of the story and the title if the girl is mute or something or she doesn't want to talk because of specific past.

ღ Poster&Background(3/5): The poster is kinda plain, but if conveys the theme of sadness and angst, you should write it in the tags. Many people might want to read a gangster story with romance comedy.

ღ Foreword&Description(4/10): A typo of 'parents' but we could close one eye. The description didn't really attract me into reading your story. You could edit it a little, make sure that you link the meaning of the title into the description and create a little mystery into it so people would start to become curious. You wrote 'Her brothers are Asia's most feared gang' but then.. what? You could write something like "Her brothers are Asia's most feared gangs, but what will happen if Misun....?"

ღ Plot’s uniqueness(9/20): I've seen and read a lot of fics that are similar to yours. But yours were probably a bit more direct to the one I read. But it wasn't that interesting for me to read :( so I can't give you a very high mark since it's not exactly original or unique and the plot doesn't exactly interest me as well.

ღ Flow(7/20): It's quite rushed with everything and the events. So it's pretty confusing and hard for me to keep track on.

ღ Grammar&Spelling(17/20): Grammar is okay, but sometimes, you missed sentences where you need comma (,) or exclamation mark for example: "Omo(!) oppa(,) are you going to hit a girl?"

ღ Words(10/10): The use of words and vocabulary are normal, you're using the normal everyday english language. I have no problem with the words. So perfect score for ya!

ღ Interest&Enjoyment(8/10): I enjoy this story a lot but I'm not really into friendship + betrayal sooo..

ღ Overall Grade: (53/100): Your story is overall average. The story is typical and kinda boring (Sorry I have to say that). But there's only 3 chapters, who knows what you are going to do! Keep up the updates!

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