Angel's destiny

Description

Kim Jaejoong dies in an accident and comes to heaven. Up there an old man tells Jae that he can go back to earth for a few days if he wants to. Jaejoong wants to say goodbye to his brother and the man who wanted to keep him alife but failed.
 

This is a YunJae fic (and some Yoosu, too ^^), which means boyxboy. So if you don't like it, don't read :3

Besides the members of DBSK, there'll be other characters, but they are all fictional and out of my head.

English is a foreign language for me, so it won't be perfect English but I hope you'll understand what I write ^^~

Foreword

Kim Jaejoong (17 years old)

Has a little brother (Kim Junsu) who always admired his older brother. The parents of the two died ten years ago and Jaejoong and Junsu had to go to the children's home and stay there until Park Sungwoo adopted them. Jaejoong is a good student but he doesn't know what job he wants to get for the future.

 

Jung Yunho (19 years old)

Has no siblings and lives in a apartment. He attends university but often goes to parties with his best friend Shim Changmin. A lot of people think he is a playboy but only Changmin knows that he wants to find true love.

 

Kim Junsu (16 years old)

Jaejoong's brother. He's always happy und can make people laugh.  He's a clever student, too and wants to good payed job, so that he and Jae could have a happy live.

 

Park Yoochun (20 years old)

Lived overseas with his mother for the previous eleven years and is now home again. He lives in a big house with his father who adopted the two Kim brothers. He's glad to have two new 'brothers' - he often feels alone. He goes to the same university as Yunho and Changmin.

 

Shim Changmin (18 years old)

Is Yunho's best friend since they were children. Mostly, he's someone who doesn't care about things but he can be a very kind person if he just want to. Secretly he's in love with Jaejoong (they met eachother at the childern's home, because Changmin is an orphan, too), but nobody knows about this.

 

Park Sungwoo (45 years old)

His wife left him years ago, but he's still happy with his only son, Yoochun. Since he saw how lonely his son was (because Sungwoo has a lot of work to do) he decided to adopt two childrens.

Note: Picture isn't mine!

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kyseobie
#1
Chapter 7: Woooooho. I still dont know why you know yunho. You know yunho. U know yunho! I cant get over it xD blushing changmin ~~~~~ ♡ updaaaaate lol
WhatsOnTheCeiling
#2
yes, very happy kekekekeke
WhatsOnTheCeiling
#3
Kekekekeke, good update, i wanna see yunho meet jaejoong, wonder how thats gonna turn out<br />
Update soon~
WhatsOnTheCeiling
#4
wah! really good so far! i wonder how things are gonna go down though. update soon!
ChocoNemo #5
@nanoismus: <br />
I definitly like it <3<br />
It's already edited, and I've sent you the places, where you made the typos :).<br />
But you have to continue writing, already tomorrow *wants to read chapter 3*<br />
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Till tomorrow <3
ChocoNemo #6
@nanoismus: I finally understand, how to edit the chapters - and I already did it :) ! <br />
*being proud of myself*<br />
haha...<br />
You are writing on chapter 2 just by now, aren't you?<br />
*if no....muahahaha* *just joking*<br />
But I really look forward that this story will be continued - I love to read it <3<br />
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Hugs, Nemo
ChocoNemo #7
Aww...you're so cute <3<br />
Huhm...but I'm really not a genius, what shows just by now...Because I don't know, how to edit the story...not, that there's a lot to edit :)There are just some typos, and I know, you would know it better :)<br />
*it's not, that I know anything*<br />
I really love the story...especially this part: "Yes. I know, it's harsh to say, but you're dead. I'm in a rush, so I'll make it short: since you couldn't say goodbye to you family, friends and your girlfriend, you can go back to earth for 18 days if you want to."<br />
And this coming from a holy person - love it.<br />
I hope, I'll understand, how I can fix the mistakes...someday, with your help?<br />
Hopefully, you will continue writing :)<br />
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Love from ChocoNemo <3<br />
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PS: English isn't my native language too, so please be thoughtful :)