She's Coming

Closing of Broken Hearts

 

 

People are all gathering on the same place somewhere in Gangnam. Yoona officially opened her coffee shop and it becomes very attracted to customers especially guys since the employees and the owner are such beautiful people. Taeyeon is assigned as the cashier and Sooyoung is entertaining the customers, making them familiar with the place and as well as be comfortable. Sooyoung is such a friendly person and talkative so she's really good in talking to people. While she's chatting with a guy, it suddenly calls her attention that Yoona has been standing outside the cafe with moderate expression in her glowing face. She tells the guy that she needs to excuse herself for a second.

"hey, what's up with you? Are you waiting for someone" she started a conversation

"yep....don't worry, it's not Minho. He won't make it today" Sooyoung is about to mention Minho but Yoona got first saying it

"so, are you waiting for someone?? Is it a guy? If it is, I'll be happy to meet him"

"it's okay with you?"

"of course because it means that you're finally trying to forget the love you feel towards SOMEONE" Sooyoung is pointing out Minho

"too bad, it's not a guy.." she shakes her head

"I've never seen you getting close with other girls instead of me and Taeng...wait, is Yuri coming?" Sooyoung's eyes grow wider. They haven't seen Yuri for a long time since they graduated in college. Though she still like Yoona better than Yuri, she loves hanging out with her. Yoona meets eyes with Sooyoung and smiles

"she's coming. I don't know what time but she said that she will. She promised"

"you're really close with that girl because you still have a contact with each other. She's working abroad, right? How come that she's here?"

"she's assigned here in Korea for a year, I guess. That's what she told me"

"you sure know everything...Despite she's a total opposite of yours, you still get along so well, even better on how we get along with her. And you can also stand her mannerisms"

"come on, don't say that. I've already accepted that she has the i-don't-care attitude. There's nothing we could if she's really like that"

"as usual, the most understanding friend award goes to Im Yoona. I'm just wondering when will I get to see Im Choding again. It's been a long time though"

"if I were you, I will go back inside and do my job. You're being paid here, Soo"

"I remembered something that I need to do inside" Sooyoung heads back inside the cafe with a funny feeling. It's even cooler if a guy will visit today. Sooyoung thought. Yoona laughs a little when Sooyoung mentioned about her being choding before. She’s always one of the boys when they were still in high school and of course, she always act so childish but her friends find it cute.

 

It's already passed 8 pm. Everyone is cleaning up the coffee shop together. All of the employees including Yoona are around the corners while Taeyeon keeps herself busy in counting their income for the day. Yoona is currently cleaning a table. She places the emptied glasses and plates as well as the the other utensils on a tray. She's about to carry it with her hands when she felt hands touching her hands on the tray

"you shouldn't carry these kind of things. It's too dangerous" Minho said while smiling at her. Yoona suddenly felt happy when she saw Minho in front of her. Her face turns pink and and feels joy in her heart. Minho puts the fully loaded tray on the dirty utensils area

"what are you doing here?" she asked

"I'm here to pick you up and bring you home" As usual, Minho treats Yoona very well

"if that's the case, you'll have to wait for half an hour"

"that's okay" Minho touches Yoona's top. Sooyoung and Taeyeon are just observing them from afar. She's falling for his handsome looks again and his simple words. Minho is sitting on the vacant chair near the door entrance. He's playing with the tissue box when a well-attired woman enters the shop. Minho lifts his head to meet with the girl

"I'm sorry, miss but......" Minho cut his words as he looks  at the beautiful girl with wavy brownish hair and black pearl skin

"Yuri!!" Yoona shouted the girl's name and run towards her to hug her slim body

"Yoong!!" they hug each other so happily while Minho is still froze out in his standing position. So her name is Yuri. It really fits her image and look. How can this girl look so perfect in my eyes? Lots of different good thoughts are running inside Minho's head. This isn't a normal thing to happen whenever he sees a new girl. He can't take over of his heart from beating so fast.

"you're still the same Yoona especially the way you look. Not much has changed" Yoona doesn't know if it's a good thing or not but she just ignores it. This is usually how Yuri speaks, she does not watch out for the words that will come out from

"By the way, this is Minho, my super best friend and Minho, this is Yuri" Yoona introduced them with each other

"so this is Minho. It's nice to meet you" Yuri offers him a hand shake. It's taking him a few seconds to respond. I'm going to hold her hand for the first time. Minho feels really nervous as he tries to shake hands with her. Yoona noticed that Minho looks uneasy and uncomfortable in front of a girl. He's used to be the over confident Minho on the way he moves and talks but this time, Yoona feels there's something different about it. Yoona is giving Minho a weird look.

"hey, don't forget about us" Sooyoung said in a loud voice while she's waving at them

"oh!? Sooyoungie..Taeng" Yuri removes her hands from Minho and it feels like Minho's world is on slow mo. He still doesn't want to let go of her soft hands. Yoona is not liking the expression that she can see on Minho's face. He's blushing and he looks really mesmerized. The girls are having fun chatting together. It's been decades that they haven't talked like that. Instead of concentrating that much, Yoona keeps on glancing to where Minho is. Since they started talking, he can't take his eyes off of Yuri. Sooyoung noticed the activity that Yoona has been doing.

"it's already 11pm. I wish we could talk more" Sooyoung said

"I'll try to come here tomorrow" Yuri added

"you're always busy earning money, Yul" Yoona teased Yuri

"I still have to find the right guy for me so I need money to live longer" After she said that, she turns her head to Minho and he gulped  

"omo?? She's staring at me" he whispered to his self but Yuri takes her eyes away from him immediately like it’s not Minho that she’s looking at. The other employees  have already left an hour before. Yuri invites them for a lift on their way home

"me and Soo are okay with it...I don't know with Yoona" Taeyeon and Sooyoung are closing and locking the shop. Minho is already on his bike, waiting for Yoona. He tries to put out his attention from Yuri.

"I don't think I can. Minho waited for m. It's kind of harsh if I'll just leave him out. Maybe next time, Yul" Sooyoung made a noise when she clears and then stares at Yoona.  Yoona really does want to come with them but she don't want to leave Minho behind

"then, we'll just go ahead" Yuri sadly said. She was hoping that Yoona can come. Yuri, Sooyoung and Taeyeon depart.

"let's go, Yoong" Minho hands her the helmet. His voice even sounded weird as if he has seen a ghost. Yoona wears the helmet and rides on his back. As usual, Minho wraps her arms around his waist and drives away

 

"we've arrived" Minho stops the bike in front of Yoona's house gate. Yoona takes off the helmet and gives it to Minho. She's about to open the gate when Minho calls her name

"Yoona...."

"mwo??" Yoona looks back positively. She has feeling that he will ask something about Yuri

"are you really that close to Yuri?" Just like what she thought

"yeah. I'm the only friend that she's very close with during our college including Soo and Taeng too"

"I see...she seems to be a nice woman"

"yep...she's very mature and such an opposite of mine"

"you better go inside now...it's cold here. Good night"

"Good night" they parted after they say their goodbyes. Yoona lies down her tired and exhausted body on her wide and soft bed. She spreads her arms and sighs heavily. As she remembers the look in Minho's face when he saw Yuri, one thing crosses her mind.

"he likes her" Yoona said to herself.

 She doesn't have any doubt about that. Yuri has always been the every guys type and she's not going to question if Minho will fall for her beauty. He's so attracted to her and can't even move in his position. But what boggles her mind, she has never seen Minho acting as a shy-type. Yoona shakes her head to forget the stupid thoughts that are running in her head. So what if he will like her? Both of them are my friends so my role is to give my support and that's what I will do. Yoona just keeps on staring at the ceiling with the lights until she shuts her eyes down and falls to sleep.

 

"I can't take out the image of that girl in my head" Minho hits his head consecutively. He keeps on remembering the girl that she just met, Yuri. It's hard to forget the image of a beautiful girl with a very mature look. He's always with cute or y girls so he can say that she's not like them. Minho is so stunned with every move that she does and the way she talked and laughed a while ago made her even more attractive to Minho. Slowly, Minho puts a smile on his face

"I guess this is really the right moment.  I've finally found the right girl for me and I think that I already like her. But how? How can I know her much more if I’m dumb when it comes to this kind of….things" Minho is actually a chic-magnet so he doesn't have any idea how to persuade a girl since he has never been interested to one. He's thinking so hard to solve this problem then he just remembers Yoona.

"That's right, I'm going to ask her to help me but, I know that girl so much. She might won't help me because she wants to protect her friends from any harm that a person or thing could bring”

 

 

 

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Jaselyn_yoong
#1
Chapter 21: Yeah!!! JongYoon! More jongyoon pls? Not CNBlue Jonghyun but SHINee jonghyun :)
takochan21 #2
Chapter 21: Hi...I'm totally new to this fanfic. I finished reading within a day. I love the ending... JongYoon. They are really meant to be...
pop-bh #3
Chapter 21: <3 great story!! I love Minyoon <3 Jongyoon is sweet~~
minhonna
#4
Chapter 21: Jongyoon couple ending! Honestly, i am struggling to be able to accept that,.. Keke
though minyoon isn't the end, but thankfully, you put minyoon end scene which means minyoon moment is everlasting as best friend. It's more enough to deliver my happiness.

~thank you so much, authornim! You have done a great work =)

Now, i am waiting for subtitute husband, we got married, and of course YOUR NEW FANFIC OF MINYOON *wink*
aetherius
#5
Chapter 21: I'm crying tears of joy right now TT.TT This ending was just asdkaajsdhka *BAWLING* While reading this fanfic I got caught up with the JongYoon and then I realize how it started with MinYoon and those feelings returned and I felt so nostalgic. They were the two main characters and it ended just like it started and I truly admired how it almost emphasizes the fact that behind the force of love is friendship, and it's the friendship that manages to last.
CONGRATULATIONS <3 I know how much effort you put into writing and this story wasn't the easiest to handle especially with plot twists and whatnot. You did a great job and I hope to see you other stories finished. Also let's do well on your new story <3
Thank you for updating even though it's not the easiest thing to do. I'm so grateful you never gave up :D It's bittersweet seeing such a sweet story end, but knowing that you'll be writing more gives me a feeling of assurance because I'm sure each and every work or yours will be better than the last and beautiful in it's own way. Sorry for this ridiculously long and cheesy comment but I do hope you feel my support ahaha <3 HWAITING WOOT WOOT \o/
SingMeASongASong
#6
Chapter 21: I want to say that I've really loved your story the whole time, even though I haven't commented on it until now. Your writing is AMAZING and you make me see a whole new side to the characters from how they are shown in many other fanfics! A lot of readers complain to authors about how often they update, but I think that even taking a "long time" (by their standards) is okay because your story is so worthwhile. I'm kind of sad it ended, but all good things have to come to an end. <3
minhonna
#7
Chapter 20: I read your note, do u make a new minyoon fanfic? What's the title? Is it The Tale of The City???
minhonna
#8
Chapter 20: Minho, are you okay? Don't be sad! Be strong :)
author-nim, i keep anticipating for minyoon , keke *stubborn, right?* =D

Please, i want an update! Waiting for it..