my visitors and the end

why should i accept????!!!!!

onew's pov

we saw minho walking away after he just said he was going to talk to the manager about something 

now we were done eating and were just sitting in the cafeteria waiting for him 

''oh guys you still here?''minho came smiling we all nodded 

''what happened?why did you want to see the manger so much?''key asked

''well something came up home so i need to go i told the manager to give us this day free so you guys can do what you want as well''minho said sitting on the chair beside taemin

''home?what happen?''i asked worried a bit

''i still don't know much myself i'll go to find out''he said obviously getting worried

''so what are you going to do today since we are free to do what we want?''

''i'm going home''jonghyun said raising his finger in the air

''me too i  miss my mother's food''taemin said

''just your mother's food?''i asked raising my eyebrow

''ahh of course my mom too''he smiled cheaply and key chuckled 

''then i'll be going now guys take care guys i'll be back late or i think so''minho said as he get up and walked away waving

''take care''taemin said waving

''all if something happened''i shouted since he was far already he just waved his hand without turning back

''how about you hyung what are you going to do?''key asked putting all his attintion on me 

''i have nothing to do and nothing in mind why?''i asked looking at him

a big smile appeared on his face ''great then you'll...''

i cut him ''ahh sorry key i just remembered i had something to do''

''liar it's not going to work .you ARE going shopping with me''he smirk i sighed with pout while taemin and jonghyun were laughing non stop *dammit i'm stuck now*

 

minho's pov

''so what do you mean i have visitors?who can come to see me?''i asked jungmin on the phone when i was still in the boss

''i don't know there is man and women and their daughter she seems in our age the man said he is your uncle''

''what you mean my uncle my father don't have any brothers nor sisters he was the only son''i said not really getting it

''well i don't know anything they are sitting in the living room waiting for you so hurry up would you?'' 

''i just get out of the bus so i need two minutes ''

''okay i'm waiting''i locked the phone and pushed it into mu pucket and start walking as fast as possible 

two minutes passed and i was already in front of my house i opened the door with my key and walked slowly inside i was getting more and more nervous

''i'm home''i said almost whispereing 

''oh you are here''jangmin said and stood up he was in the living room

''yes''i said looking at the strangers sitting there

''hello you must be minho you look just like your mother''the man said standing up smiling at me

''hello''i bowed''everyone tell me i look like dad but thanks''i said 

''not true you have your mother's nose and eyes''the women said smiling and taking steps to me

she put her hand on my shoulder ''sit this must be shoucking to you but we'll explain everything to you don't worry''she said still smiling 

i sat on the couch beside the girl since it was the only free space but we didn't talk not even a word not even looking at each other well, i put my attintion on the man

''so, i don't want to be rude but may i ask who are you''i asked

''ahh right we didn't introduce ourselves i'm your uncle''

''but my father never had any brothers''i said 

''true your father don't but your mother do''

''my mother?''*i know nothing about my mother's family she never spoke about them my grandma didn't as well no one ever mention anything about it*it's  not like i asked. it never hit me

''yes i know she probably never spoke about me did she?''he asked looking down

i just shook my head slowly ''sorry but i never knew my mom had brother''i said

''it's okay don't worry about it and if you don't belive us we have picture if you want a....''

''no no it's okay i do believe you but may i know what happen and why did you just show up?''i said 

they nodded and the man started to talk

 

yuri's pov

i had nothing to do and almost all the girls were busy so i went to the practice room in sm to dance and time to think a bit 

i turned the music on and was about to start when i saw the door swung opened i looked and it was jessica

''yuri?what are you doing here?''she asked coming inside the practice room 

''bored so i came to dance ,you?''

''i was going to practice for my musical,is everything okay?''she asked 

''i think so, why asking?''

''i don't know lately you always seem deep  in your thoughts''

''unnie''i spoke slowly in low voice

she shut the music down and sat on the floor ''tell me''she said dragging me to sit on the floor beside her

''how do you know if you like someone or just care about him as friend?''i asked

''ahh so this is the deal?you are cheating on me?how dare you?''(ps.to who don't know snsd well jessica and yuri are the royal family and yoona is their daughter)

''unnie'' i shouted

''sorry, well i don't know much about this kind of things you know but as i heard from movies and dramas you know you love someone when you keep thinking of him like 24 hours a day and worry alot about him and this kind of things but if just friend you'de worry about him once a time or so i don't know''she shook her head

''why ? who are you thinking about so much?''

''just there is a person that i keep thinking of.''

''ooooo~ my girl fall in love''sica smiled widely and hugged me

''not love but like i think?''

''you sure love him''she patted my head

 

onew's pov

''oh common key let's go eat nae?i'm hungry''i begged key to stop dragging me to another shop

''oh common hyung we don't have everyday free to go shopping please stop whining and just enjoy okay?''

''i'm hungry''i whined

''kidding?it was like three hours only since you ate''

''exactly it's three hours''i pouted

''hyung just stop whining and i promise i'll treat you to chicken after this okay?''he smiled

*okay how can i say no when there is chicken waiting for me?*

''what are you waiting for enter the shop already''i said pushing him in

 

minho's pov

''ahh i see''

''yeah we were in japan all this time and we heard only afew days ago that your grandmother passed away so we came to check on you''he said smiling

''everything is fine i'm working already and doing the job that i always wanted to do''i said smiling

''may i aske what is it?''the women asked smiling

''i'm trainee in sm entertainment''i answered they only nodded 

''ahh by the way that's our daughter and your cousin her name is jimi she can't speak well in korean''

''i'm not that bad mom''she finally spoke i looked at her and smiled ''minho''i said as i extend my hand for handshake

''jimi''she smiled and shake my hands i'll be calling you oppa then

''how old are you?''

''i was born in 1992''

''ahh i'm older in one year''i nodded she did the same 

after a long talk we ordered food since they were tired 

at 9:pm i left the house back to the dorm 

''i'm home''i said

''ohh hyung come to see this''taemin shouted from his room

''what is it?''i asked when i came in to the room

''people loves us''taemin shouted happily

''they do?but what are you talking about?''i asked

''there is so many comments on our video''

''what video''

''oh common hyung wake up would you our preformance in the sm concert?''

''ahh sorry i left my mind home so what did people said?''i said smiling and coming closer to the laptop screen

''wow all those comments''

''yes hyung there is so many there is no way to read them all and there is in foreign languages i don't know what languages are they''he smiled i smiled as well 

''where are the boys?''i asked

''key and onew hyungs called that they were going to eat chicken''i chuckled and nodded

''jonghyun?''

''he is still home he said that he is going to sleep home tonight so he is not coming''

''okay i'll go watch tv wanna come?''i asked

''no thanks i'm chatting and busy here''he smiled and put his attintion back to the laptop screen 

''okay then''i patted his shoulder and walked to the living room

i sat for about half an hour then the boys came back

''oh your back?''i said they dropped onthe couch beside me

''yes that was so fun''key said still excited

''fun you say?it was like hell except for the last hour of course it was the best ever''onew closed his eyes thinking about the last part

''chicken?''i asked key he nodded , i shook my head but with a smile

''hyung''i called onew

''hmm''he said

''if you had to choose between us''i pointed at my self and key ''or chicken what would you choose?''i asked key was laughing 

''ayyyyyy  you can't make me choose between food and people''he said

i made a mad face ''so that mean chicken?you would actually choose chicken on us?''key said making mad face as well and i was nodding to agree with what he just said

''i never said that.you guys are really mean''he said

''true. stop bothering my hyung''taemin came out of the room and crossed his arms we all laughed a bit 

''hey guys would you shut up i was watching the movie before you disturb me''i spoke

''what is it about?''jonghyun asked we turned back

''oh you came i thought you were going to sleep home today''onew said

''you want me to go?beside this is my home right?''he spoke we just nodded

''common sit i really want to continue the movie''i said dragging jjong to the couch 

we all sat and watched the movie when the movie was about to end i looked at the boys they were all sleeping already

it was 11:30 now  i shook the boys to go to their beds finally at 12 everyone was sleeping in their beds i laid on my bed 

i kept turning from side to another from left to right from right to left but i couldn't sleep anyhow

i changed my clothes and put my jacket and shoes on and walked out of the dorm

i couldn't think of any where to go except for the han river since i can't go home while i was walking there i saw familiar figure 

i took a closer look then widen my eyes when i made sure it was her but a smile was forming my lips 

''what are you doing here?''i asked

''ohh minho?how about you?''

''i couldn't sleep i needed some fresh air''

''the same here''

''is there is something bothering you?''

''not really i was just thinking about things what about you?and aren't you going to sit or you are going to stay standing there?''she said the last part with raised eyebrow

i sat beside her

''today my uncle came to find me''i spoke

''find you?''yuri asked

''yeah i never even knew that i had one can you believe that?''i smiled sadly ''he had a huge fight with my mother because she didn't want to move with the rest of the family to japan she wanted to stay in korea and marry dad since then they never talked they never saw each other how can that be?i don't understand it my self''i sighed

''they heard that my grandma passed away and got worried about how am i living alone so they came to look after me and they wanted to take me to japan with them''

''why did they came back, i thougth i don't have any relatives it's not like i'm botherd or anything but how can they leave my mom just like that , and why she never talked about them as if they don't exist that's what really bothering me they are family after all''i said really getting angry only by thinking of that but then i remembered with who i'm talked and lowered my voice again ''sorry i just wanted to tell someone i didn't mean to bother you''i said looking down

''you never think this way, you never ever botherd me and never will''she smiled softly at me 

my heart was beating like crazy i looked at the river and took a breath trying to calm my self 

''minho''she called softly

''hmm?''

''i'm sorry''

''for what?''i asked looking at her

''hmm you know in the class i was really mean to you sometimes i just can't control my self and...''

while she was talking she seemed really worried or guilty i don't know but when i saw her talking that way i wanted to shut her somehow without thinking much about it i pressed my lips on hers 

her eyes were so big well mine were widen as well i my self was really shocked by the action that i just did but really soon like two seconds she closed her eyes and smiled in the kiss i closed my eyes as well ......

 

2 months later

''everyone on the stage together now''the crew shouted

''okay''the manger said ''ready boys?''

''yes'' we all shouted in union smiling

the huge stage was full of idols who were singing and dancing around

i looked at yuri who was running in the other side of the stage .we met eyes and she winked at me but turned right away in order no one notice i smiled and looked at the boys who became like my real family in the short while we spend together they were all smiling happily ,i turned to the audience and saw jangmin , and haemin standing there they were waving at me i smiled back then my eyes landed on my cousin we bacame really close she stayed in korea to study and her parents went back to japan but they visit often 

''this is the best day ever, all who i love and care for are in one place''i smiled 

 

okay maybe you are curious about what happen?

me and yuri are going out but no one knows except our groups even the managers don't know anything

the boy haemin was dating he was jerk so she break up with him and now she is dating jangmin and her mom is really happy with that since she trust him 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

okay the longest chapter i ever write i start writing it at 3 and now is 7:4pm ahhh this is the final chapter ahh sad but i did what you guys wanted 

i was planning to go with story for about 40 chapter but after the poll i changed my mind and made it into one chapter i hope you are happy with that 

i'm really thankful for the people who commented because it's like the best thing ever

choikhatymin90 ,  monko92  you guys are the best really i was really thankful 

i have to admit one thing :(

i was going to end the story in horrible way as revenge for who voted for ending the story but then i was like oh common maybe they were just teasing me because i said ''better not see any vote'' or at least i hope so because after all i never forced anyone to read the story did i? so i thought if they hated the story they could just leave it any time ahhhh i was really upset yesterday but it's okay now

i hope readers who never commented nor subscribed but read the story and voted 

i hope you comment for once in order i'de know there were more people reading

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shakeela
#1
Chapter 1: wow interesting chapter
SimplyCalicoCat
#2
Chapter 26: PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
This story is Daebak i tell ya author-nim
I like it ^^
STAR00LIGHT
#3
Chapter 25: ........o_O............
But why the end????
And do you know very interested to more about this story
so thnx very very much
STAR00LIGHT
#4
Chapter 23: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............................
OMG is he okay...................................??
Wow thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#5
Chapter 22: Wahhh i'm happy i miss them and the dorm missed them too
thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#6
Chapter 21: Thnx for the chapter poor Key
STAR00LIGHT
#7
Chapter 20: Wow thank you for the chapter it was really good when minho was telling his story i was trying to keep quite cuz i was almost crying thank you againe fighting!!!
STAR00LIGHT
#8
Chapter 19: o_O i can't belive it.........
Are they going to the punishment camp??
OMG poor shinee
thnx for the it was great
MyMinnieHo
#9
Chapter 25: Aaahhh... I feel not enough... This is so suddenly... I think it's will more and more chapter but it's end today... I'm so so sad... T_T But, i'm still happy cause in the end mihno together with yuri and minho find out his other family... ^^ Thank you author for great story like this although i'm angry a little because this is end so fast... :D