free day

why should i accept????!!!!!

today is free and i woke up early i don't even know how come i woke up early i was laying on the couch while watching some comedy programs when my phone vebrait

''oh i have sms''

hello minho i'm sorry for not being in contact with you for week but i was really busy you haven't forget me did you?anyway i need to go now because i have to practice with the members byee~^^

i start typing back

hi noona^^ of course i haven't forget about you thanks to my friend he is huge fan you know.i watched your shows you are the best .do your best in the practice take care byee~^_^

i put the mobile down on the couch again and continue watching the tv when my phone vebrate again

hello hyung it's taemin are you free today i'm totally free so if you are i want to go out to have some fun^^ if not it's okay don't worry about it ^^

''oh it's taemin okay why not''

hi taemin i'm free let's have somefun can i bring my friend with me?and where do you like to go?

of course bring your friend and i'll bring my hyungs and about where to go well it's been while since i'm telling my hyungs to go to the amusement park but they were busy so how about it? 

''amusement park?well why not it'll be fun''a smile appeared on my face

amusement park it is i want to go there too let's meet at 2 is it okay with you?

yaeeee sure it's great see ya

*aigoo seriously he is so cute like a little baby*

''you are awake?'' avoice startled me

''ahh yeah why didn you sleep here yesterday?''

''i was too lazy to go home yesterday beside my parents aren't home so i'm alone anyway''jangmin said

''you want to go out today?i met a friend afew days ago and we agreed to go to the amusement park today i told him you'll come''

''him?''

''yes he's younger than us his name is taemin''

''okay''he said still sleeping

''aren't you going to get up?'' i asked

''aren't you going to make me breakfast . huh beat that''he said with smirk on his face

''you want me to kick you out of the house? in your face''

''okay okay gosh you bacame better in this game i'm going to shower ''

''okay'' he get up and went to the bathroom

i went to the kitchen to prepare the breakfast 

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in the way to the amusement park

''so how did you met this friend?''changmin asked when we were in the bus

''hmm he came to the restaurant he liked to dance so we talked abit''

''okay''he siad looking out of the window

''so where did your parents go again?''i asked

''they went to america don't ask why cause i don't know'' he said still not looking

''again maybe work don't get upset''i said trying to comfor him his parents is always subject that he hates to talk about his dad travel because of his work and leave changmin alone his mother always travel around with his father

''you should find work you know''i said

''yeah i've been thinking about it lately''

''that's good''

''oh here we are''he said as we got off from the bus

i called taemin ''he said he'll be here within 2 minutes''i said to jangmin after i closed the phone

''okay''

but 2 minutes didn't past till i felt something very heavy fall on me from behind

''hyung how are you''a voice yelled

''ohh it's you hi taeminah''i said turning back to face him

i saw three boys walking slowly behind him

''i bring my hyungs with me''taemin said me and jangmin just nodded 

''hello my name is onew''one of them said soon as they arrive

''hello i'm key''another one said

''hello i'm jonghyun nice to meet you''

''hello i'm minho and this is my friend jangmin nice to meet you''[kkk sorry for so long intro it's boring i know :'( ]

''where to go first?''taemin said pushing us into the amusement park

''let's goo'' jangmin and key shouted at the same time

''what should we ride first?''key asked

''roller coaster '' onew shoted

we all agreed and start racing who is going to arrive first and of course i'm the one who won jangmin is the latest

 i sat beside onew  taemin beside jangmin ,key with jonghyun

''that was awesome''taemin said

i wasn't screaming as him but sure it's hard to walk it's so dizzy

''next?''jonghyun asked

''hmm how about...''onew was cut when jonghyun

''jangmin?are you okay?''he asked

''ahh wait i didn't get my balance yet''he said trying to stand straight

we all laughed at him he was almost dancing

''now HUNTED HOUSE''i shouted

onew and key and janghyun agreed with ''YAEEE'' but the others didn't spoke

i looked at taemin and jangmin they weren't excited actually they looked as if they are afraid

''don't tell me you are afraid of going in there''i teased them

''ofcourse not i'm waiting for you to go in''jangmin said almost shouting 

''ok okay no need to yell at me taemin?why are you standing there?''i asked

''a-a-i'm coming''he said

''w-wa why are you talking like that?don't tell me you are afraid like jangmin''key said teasing

''yahh i said i'm not afraid''jangmin shouted

''yeah we aren't afraid of anything''taemin said as he start walking faster

taemin walked beside me ''hyung i'll tell you the truth iam afraid but i don't want hyungs to tease me for the rest of life please don't tell them''he wishperd to me 

we were walking in the front but when he said that to me i dragged him behind the others

''like this they won't notice how afraid you are''i wishperd back

soon as we enterd the hunted house all those voices and smells and the ghosts were like every where 

we walked beside a women laying on the bed we thought she wasn't alive when the other boys walked passing her she didn't move but soon as we arrive '' AAAAAAAAA''taemin screamed

but onew and jangmin shouted along with taemin for support maybe 

taemin linked his hand with mine he was holding into my hands too hard that i couldn't feel my hand anymore

we saw how jonghyun was holding his screams but he jumbed once awhile 

of course i jumbed once or twice when something suddenly touch me 

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''huyng why were you screaming?''taemin said looking at onew

''i-i i didn't scream''he said blushing

''you did you screamed when i screamed i heard your voice was even louder than mine''taemin teased

''i was just singing''he said giveing death glares to taemin

''is it that hard to say you were afraid''taemin mumbeld to him seld loud enought to every one hear him

''we had alot of fun today thank you for the company'' key said 

''yes it was great and fun day'' onew said

''are we going?''taemin said

''yeah you know we have to go before the practice time start''jjang said

''okay take care it was nice to meet you''i said bowing the bowed too then waved to us 

''let's go''i said to jangmin he nodded and we walked to the bus stop

''it was fun''i said

''yes it is they are good guys as well it was good comany''he said

''coming to sleep over?''i asked

''ofcourse i am''

''let's go to the market first i need some things''i said

 

 

 

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soo how was it?was it fun?i wanted to make a day full of fun and useless things but i don't know if it was good :/

plz plz pleeeeeeeeease don't be silent reader give me your opinion people

it's no fun to write when i'm not sure if there is someone reading isn't?

anyway comment & subscribe i swear i don't bite

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post 7

That awkward moment when your mom compares you to another kid and she has no idea how much worse they are than you.

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shakeela
#1
Chapter 1: wow interesting chapter
SimplyCalicoCat
#2
Chapter 26: PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
This story is Daebak i tell ya author-nim
I like it ^^
STAR00LIGHT
#3
Chapter 25: ........o_O............
But why the end????
And do you know very interested to more about this story
so thnx very very much
STAR00LIGHT
#4
Chapter 23: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............................
OMG is he okay...................................??
Wow thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#5
Chapter 22: Wahhh i'm happy i miss them and the dorm missed them too
thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#6
Chapter 21: Thnx for the chapter poor Key
STAR00LIGHT
#7
Chapter 20: Wow thank you for the chapter it was really good when minho was telling his story i was trying to keep quite cuz i was almost crying thank you againe fighting!!!
STAR00LIGHT
#8
Chapter 19: o_O i can't belive it.........
Are they going to the punishment camp??
OMG poor shinee
thnx for the it was great
MyMinnieHo
#9
Chapter 25: Aaahhh... I feel not enough... This is so suddenly... I think it's will more and more chapter but it's end today... I'm so so sad... T_T But, i'm still happy cause in the end mihno together with yuri and minho find out his other family... ^^ Thank you author for great story like this although i'm angry a little because this is end so fast... :D