key pass out

why should i accept????!!!!!

annyong kkkk i think i have to do one thing before writing the chapter i have to describe the camp in order you guys can imagien it with me okay

A small forest surrounded by earthy road in circle form there is a small building where ius the kitchen and etc... and not so far a small room it has it's own bathroom and shower that's where the boys are staying

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minho's pov

the first day passed finally. on 9:00 we were free to sleep or do what we want to

at 10:30 we all layed on the mattresses i was between onew and taemin on taemin's side there was key then jonghyun

soon as i put my head on the pillow i don't remember anything after that i slept right away.i don't think it's wired after such long and tiring day right?

at 5am the coach's voice shredded our peaceful dreams

i opened my eyes slowly and looked around taemin was still sleeping onew was half a sleep and key was fully awake and jonghyun was still asleep

''morning''i smiled half asleep to key who didn't bother to smile he just nodded''morning''

''morning hyung''i turned to onew who smiled and spoke with his morning raspy and deep voice.

''hyung you know that you are really annoying sleep talker don't you?''

''what no i don't''onew defended

''yes you do'' i nodded

''minho don't lie''onew spoke starting to get a bit mad

''hyung you speek non stop and the most wierd thing is that you talk only about things you don't like'' i tried to hold my laughter at his scared expression

''m minho won't you shut up''he hissed to me

''puhahahahahaa hyung when you sleep you nore like dead body i was just kidding''i said but before i could finish my words i was getting hits by onew's pillow ''you are the worst person on earth you arghh''he shouted while still hitting me i was still laughing when someone yelled

''yahhh i have headache won't you both stop being so noisy''key yelled

we were shocked it was the first time key raise his voice in front of me

*i think his headache is really strong that make him in such a mood*

after 15 minutes we were all ready standing in front of the coatch

''i'll be reading for you your daily schedule i don't want to hear any comments till the end got it?'' he shouted

we nodded

''i didn't hear the answer''he shouted again

''yes sir''we said in union

''5pm waking up

5:30 till 7 running

7 prepare breakfast

free till 10

10 search for the boxes at the forest

11 doing push up , sit up, plank,and other types of exercise

1pm rest

2pm preparing lunch then eating

4pm cleaning

5pm looking for the boxes again

7pm sitting on the camp fire to talk honest talk and reveal your anger or things you are not satasfied with with the other members

9 go to bed

ps. cellphones and cameras are not allowed. any questions?'' he asked stern

''i have one sir''taemin raised his hand up in the air

''talk''

''how come your voice never shake?''taemin asked

we barely hold our laughter

the coatch looked at taemin with big eyes for two seconds then cleared his throat ''questions about the schedule''he shouted

''sir''onew asked

''what boxes were you talking about''

''there is hidded boxes all around the camp there is 10 you will be able to go back when you find them all'' he said

''then if we didn't found them?''jonghyun asked

''you won't go back before finding them now it's 5:30 what are you waiting for start running''he shouted the last words we all started running



key's pov

everything went well even though i was really tired

now it's 11:30 i was doing the sit up and minho was holding me legs we were about to switch positions i was going to get up in order he would lay in my place but i couldn't get hold of my strenght i didn't feel anything after that everything went black in other words i pass out

after while i opened my eyes on the boys's voice ''hyung?''

''are you awake?''

''are you okay?''

''if you are tired you should have just said so''

''hyung?''

''can you hear me?''

''key?''

''hyung'' they were all talking at the same time even through i know it's because they were worried but it was annoying i looked at the time it was 12 already

''shut up guys would you''i said slowly ''i want to sleep''i said weakly

''didn't you sleep enough at night?''jonghyun asked

i couldn't just shut up at this point

''well if you didn't use me as your pillow at night and hugged me too much for the first second then kick me in the next seconds maybe i would've actually slept''i yelled all of them looked at me surprised

''guys i really wanna get some sleep''i said pleading

''what are you waiting for?let's go''minho said i smiled at him then closed my eyes trying to sleep again



taemin's pov

we all walked out of the room the coach told us we can do whatever we want to get our energy back till 4pm

''guys''i spoke

''yes?''onew said and everyone looked at me

''remember what the coach said?''

''about?''

''the boxes''

''what about them?''minho said

''he said if we find all of them we can go back''i said smiling

''true .so you want us to go look for them now?'' jonghyun asked

''yes we can find them and all this crap would end''i said clapping

i split to two groups i was with minho and jonghyun was with onew

we walked in to that forest

''what do you think there will be in those boxes?''i asked

''i don't know maybe some letter or empty''minho said

''ayyy it won't be interesting then''i said and looked back to the earthy road

while we were walking and looking aroung we didn't talk much but suddenly something cought my eyes

''hyung''i shouted and ran

''what is it?''he asked and ran after me

''look at this''i showed him an old big tree

''so?''he asked not getting the hint

''hyung it there were other people here like us they wrote their names on it let's do it''i said excited

''no''he said stern

i was shocked by his tone with me ''why?hyung is there is something wrong?''i asked

''ofcourse there is. since we are group we should write down all other names not just the two of us''he said

*make sense*

i nodded and smiled okay then i got up to walk towords minho when i tripped with something and fall

''ouchhhh'' i whined

''are you okay''minho asked giving me his hand to help

''yes hyung i'm fine''just then i looked at what did i tripped with and saw something brown

''what is this?''i took a closer look it was between the tall grass

minho get closer and took it it was a really small brown box

''we found the first''minho said excited putting his hand with the box in to the air

i stood up and start jumping up and down with happiness

''hyung let's open it''i said

minho nodded and hold the box's bottom with one hand and start opening the box with the other hand

when he opened the box we both widen our eyes

''omo they are giving us mp3''i said exciting and clapping

''taemin''

''yes?''

''it's onew's mp3''minho said poker faced i looked at the mp3 again and it was really onew's mp3

''how did this come here?''i asked

''maybe they took our staff to make us look for them even more''minho said i nodded

after about 5 minutes of more looking we found another one it was on the tree we found it while we were looking at the birds so we wouldn't find it without that bird

''let's go back now''minho said i nodded and walked back to the camp thank god it wasn't very big forest so we didn't really get lost

when we get back to our room we saw onew and jonghyun coming from the distance waving happily at us

''did you find something?''i asked

they nodded ''minho's headphones and key's book''jonghyun said

''how about you. you find?''onew asked

''your mp3''i said ''and my watch''minho said

''so they took two thing from each person?''onew said

''what are you guys talking about?''

we looked back it was key standing crossing his arms with one raused eyebrow

''hyung''i shouted and ran to hug him

he ruffled my hair

''are you okay hyung?''i asked

''better than ever''he said smiling

''guys''minho spoke

we all looked at him

''hmm how about we play soccer?''he asked

''wow great idea''i said excited

''okay why not''key said

jonghyun nodded so we all waited for onew's replay

''well..who knows when we will have the chance to play again''he clapped his hands

''yaee let's goooo''key shouted

we called the trainer in order he will be the judgment and to our surprise there were many people who came that we didn't even saw before so we ( shinee) were one team and other boys were in the other team

we had so much fun even though we were the one who lost but it was only one goal different but minho was kind of mad but didn't really show it





minho's pov

it's been 5 day in the camp already even through we had to do so many things and we ended the day like dead bodies but we had so much fun so many memories we started to know how to cook alittle bit kkkk

we found 9 boxes now but no one could find the last one and the lost thing was for jonghyun so he was kind of upset about this

''sir can't you give us a small hint about the place of the last box?''onew said

even through the trainer wasn't so strict anymore with us but we still can't say he's very nice

''just remember the best place to hide something is the obvious place''with those words we ended that day

''aigoo i start losing hope''taemin complained

''go to sleep taemin stop talking''jonghyun said

the nest morning when we were on the time of resting it was about 10 am we were in the forest but i had some headache so i told the boys to go without me and i went to the room to relax for a bit

when i walked in to the room i was sitting slowly on the floor when i noticed something wierd on the top of the closet

i stood and took a closer look ''oh my god i found the last box''i shouted and ran out looking for the boys

jonghyun was very happy that he got his phone back and we all were happy because he is happy

*on who i'm lying we were happy because we are going back to seoul*



and that day we went back we arrived to seoul at 11pm so we went to sleep right away since tomorrow we will go back to the practice room











long boring chapter i know i'm sorry but i promise the next chapter alot of things will happen afew good things and other shocking news please look forwaed to it

i wanted to make some fun or show how they were suffering in the camp but it was so hard to describe it i had many ideas but couldn't put it well sorry for that

 

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shakeela
#1
Chapter 1: wow interesting chapter
SimplyCalicoCat
#2
Chapter 26: PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
This story is Daebak i tell ya author-nim
I like it ^^
STAR00LIGHT
#3
Chapter 25: ........o_O............
But why the end????
And do you know very interested to more about this story
so thnx very very much
STAR00LIGHT
#4
Chapter 23: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............................
OMG is he okay...................................??
Wow thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#5
Chapter 22: Wahhh i'm happy i miss them and the dorm missed them too
thnx for the chap
STAR00LIGHT
#6
Chapter 21: Thnx for the chapter poor Key
STAR00LIGHT
#7
Chapter 20: Wow thank you for the chapter it was really good when minho was telling his story i was trying to keep quite cuz i was almost crying thank you againe fighting!!!
STAR00LIGHT
#8
Chapter 19: o_O i can't belive it.........
Are they going to the punishment camp??
OMG poor shinee
thnx for the it was great
MyMinnieHo
#9
Chapter 25: Aaahhh... I feel not enough... This is so suddenly... I think it's will more and more chapter but it's end today... I'm so so sad... T_T But, i'm still happy cause in the end mihno together with yuri and minho find out his other family... ^^ Thank you author for great story like this although i'm angry a little because this is end so fast... :D