The Chaser

Description

What would you do in a situation where your life was being threatened by a man you had assumed may be the love of your life?

What if that man was holding you hostage in a plane 5,000 feet high in the air in the middle of no where on the way to certain doom?

What if that man has fallen in love with you?

Do you run?

Do you hide?

Will you die?

There's only one way to find out. Come, join us on the Chaser: The one way flight into hell.

 

"My name is Kim Myungsoo."

"Lee Sungjong."

"I hope we can be very close, beautiful Sungjong."

 

"Why are you doing this to me?"

"You tell the flight attendant, and your lover dies."

 

"Are you insane?"

"Do you want me to be? Because I can assure you, if you think I'm terrifying now, wait until then. I'm sure you'll want out of this tight compartment even more."

Foreword

Hello everyone. Or.. Well. I don't know, just hello. It's been a while since  I've written a fan fiction, and I've decided I'm going to start anew and create a fanfiction that really sparks my interest - A thriller. If some of you have already seen the movie Red Eye, then I'm pretty sure this fan fiction will bring up memories of that film. But don't worry, this story isn't going to be word for word what that movie was about. There's a twist. Romance can come in all different shapes and sizes, and sometimes in the form of a weapon, eh?

I hope you all like this, and please let me know if you do or if you don't or what you think should be changed or if you have suggestions or questions or you like a certain part or you hate a certain part or if you like Myungsoo in the beginning or if you hate Myungsoo in the beginning or if any of the characters are off compared to the real versions of the people, just let me know about anything, I really would love to hear your feedback, and if it's a comment that desires an answer, I will be sure to reply ASAP.

Enjoy. ^.^

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lovevyk88 #1
Chapter 1: Juust what o.o why is he being like itat
Dubiaku #2
Chapter 4: "a trained soldier from the army"
Every able-bodied male in Korea that is of a certain age is a "trained soldier from the army". So what make Gyu any different? It's like saying, "You mean my lover has a head?"
Dubiaku #3
Chapter 3: A gun with a "dial"? Made by Maytag, maybe?

A pistol that has a bullet in its barrel? It will probably explode when someone fires the bullet that is where it belongs, in its chamber. There should be no way a bullet would even fit in the barrel, unless it was the wrong calibre. Boom!
Dubiaku #4
Chapter 2: Friends have leaders? Pretty strange people around here.

"that's my issue,"
Newspaper issue? Children (as in "he died without issue")? It sounds more like his "problem" to me.
Dubiaku #5
Chapter 1: "creme linoleum"
What is that? Aside from the fact that linoleum is as rare as hula hoops, is it something made from coffeee froth or something?

Why is Sungjong infamous? Is he a criminal, a cutthroat businessman, a wife-beater? What is his sin?

"neglection"
Really. Speechless.
madchiz #6
Chapter 2: Im just sooooo interested in ur story.. keep it up!
Smile-cheeks
#7
Chapter 9: Hahahah omggg, it even wasn't his phoneee ;d Poor Sunggyu~ Yeolie didn't even hear him out :O ;D Update again! Thaaanks <3 Fighting #.#
thepurplzebra
#8
Chapter 7: Myungsoo you little ____! You just can't ruin the GyuYeol couple like that! Evil evil evil...

Aww, poor hyunnie, nobody cared about him. And who the eff is that stranger!? Did Sunggyu forget to kick the assassin out?? Dude, doesn't he know that it's too much of a liability to let Assassin Joon (with his awesome boomerang bullet powers) stay in the house??
Smile-cheeks
#9
Chapter 7: Wow, I'm a little shocked, really~ But, no matter :p
Update soon, fighting ;) x