What?

When confronted with Perfection
Ann landed...and went to her home she was greeted by her family members...one person was missing...which made her realise what the emergency they were talking about...so she asked where is Dad? Is he alright? Y is he not here? She just went on asking all sort.of question...she had become anxious..now she like she will faint coz of thinking what might have have happened and the worst of outcomes..suddenly hee mom told her not to worry...ur dad is in hospital...and they will go meet him tomorrow... Although she felt sad....she felt relief her mom said not to worry... Y tomorrow....u want meet him right...let me get ready and meet him in hospital .she said and went to her room... She came back after 30Min and told lets go...go...go.... Her family members took her to hospital...although she dont know she felt anxious again...thinking what happened her dad.
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misttheory #1
Yes Dolphin it would be more interesting to talk with you..so kindly accept my friend request..then we shall talk all v want..
DolphinWorld 2005 streak #2
Chapter 41: Hello there author-nim ^_^ I finished reading your updates. Can't wait to read more. it's sad that the story would come to an end soon. but can understand why. so fighting!!!

PS would like to talk about this story to you. send me a PM if you are okay with it :)
misttheory #3
Hey dolphin (may I call u that?)Thank you for your comments..I will improve my style of writing and yah !I updated the story so kindly do read.
DolphinWorld 2005 streak #4
Chapter 39: Hello there, I just finished reading the story so far. It was nice. But I got confused at many part with your writing style. I really couldn't differentiate conversation from narration. Except for that, I find this story to be good.
When are you going to update next?
misttheory #5
Chapter 11: Thank you very....
pikachiu #6
Chapter 7: This was probably my first time seeing a story written entirely in small caps o.O But to be honest, it was so pleasant to the eyes. I don't know.. I mean like, the lines flow so nicely. And your story is great! I'm trying to catch up with all the chapters! Good luck, author!
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