When I Began To Realize...................

The Darkest Light and a Single Bullet

 

Seo ____'s POV:

I left Myungsoo and decided to go to the mall.

I've heard of it, but I've never been inside one.

I drove and saw no parking spaces at all!

What the heck?

I drove around the whole parking lot 4 times, trying to find an open spot.

I ended up waiting an hour to park.

A freaking hour!

I then went  inside and lined up were endless rows of shops that filled the building.

There were many people that were all crowded together, laughing, talking, and shopping.

Everyone was in a good mood.

Interesting....

I saw a bubble tea stand and strolled up to it.

There was a small line and when it was my turn, I gazed at all of the flavors.

I didn't know which one to pick.

There were so many flavors!

"Um, are you going to order?" the cashier asked.

I nodded and randomly chose a flavor.

Taro.

I took a cautious sip of it.

Oooooh!

Yum!

It tastes so good!

With my bubble tea in hand, I continued exploring the mall.

There were fancy designer stores to tiny peddler shops that were in the middle of the paths.

Everything was so different, like it was a whole new world.

I sat down at one of the seating areas and finished up my icy drink.

My mind lingered to Myungsoo.

What do I feel when I'm with Myungsoo?

My heart pounds and the closer he is, the harder it is to breathe.

Every bit of skinship we have makes me want to turn red.

Is that love?

I took my phone and searched: How do you know if you're in love?

If you don't know that you're inlove, you are either stupid, clueless, or inexperienced.

You know that you love someone if you're heart pounds rapidly.

Your breathing seems to stop when you are anywhere near them.

You get jealous when other girls/boys approach them.

When your with them, you feel comfortable and all of your worries go away.

That's exactly how I feel!

Oh no!

...........

I fell inlove with my target!

What do I do?

I'm in some deep now.

Kim Myungsoo's POV:

I recieved a call from Stalker Junah.

I contemplated on whether or not I should pick up her call.

I decided to press answer.

"Hello?" I asked.

"Hi Oppa it's me Junah," she squealed like some constipated pig.

I started gagging at her voice and continued the call.

"What do you need?" I quickly got to the point.

"You can't meet that anymore," she demanded me.

"WHAT? You don't control my life like that?" I yelled.

"Do as I say or else. Having 7 guys in your gang is nothing compared to Dark Shadows. Just keep that in mind," she threatened and hung up.

What the hell?

I can't afford to have any of my friends get hurt.

After all, they've been with me through thick and thin.

I'll have to let____ go unfortunately.

Hey.

Let's meet up at the coffee shop near the park.

-Myungsoo

I texted her.

A reply came back.

Sure.

-____

This is it.

Seo ____'s POV:

He wanted to meet up with me at a cafe.

I agreed.

Right now, he was my problem and I don't know what to do.

Kill him now?

Kidnap him for my brother?

I don't know!!!!!

Should I just let him be?

My heart wants that rather than harm him. 

Anyways, we both met up at the cafe as planned.

None of us talked, until Myungsoo said something.

"I can't be your friend anymore. No, I don't want to your friend," he said.

.......What?

My heart sank, but I guess I looked unfazed.

"Okay, that's it. Bye," Myungsoo left.

He left.

Just when I figured out my feelings.

With my hesrt shedding invisible tears, I went back home.

I had failed the mission.

I lost my target.

And worst of all, I don't have his love anymore.

But on the outside, I look okay.

Why is that?

I laugh at myself like a crazy person.

If only I had realized sooner.

No One's POV:

Myungsoo left first.

That was so she wouldn't see his tears.

____ left after him.

Because she no longer even cries.

They both broke apart, though one thing didn't change.

They still loved each other.

They just couldn't be together.

Their worlds may have been similar, but the sides that they were on were not.

There was no one to support them.

But, don't be sad.

Because, the story is most definitely not over yet.

In fact, it has just begun.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey!

I have a question.

What does a vote do?

I got one vote on this fanfic, but I don't know what it's for.

Anyways, I hope that you are enjoying both my story and your lives.

I'll update A.S.A.P!

Thanks,

lovegirl098

P.S. I did pretty well on my first day of my swim meet today! 

I hope it continues!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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xxEXATOxx #1
Chapter 7: Umm, when Myungsoo and the oc met each other at the club, she introduced herself as Minji (a fake name). But when she texted him she signed/ended with her real name, Seo ___. Uhh, whut??
Baby_Natasha #2
Chapter 3: Tbh, I'm having a very hard time reading the 3rd chapter... And from what I read, it's too obvious and too short for each chapter, for the fonts... Don't use too bright colour and also it's a little too small...
cxsmicskies
#3
Hello~ Just gonna telling you something about the fic. Umm.. The girl is really hard to relate with, which is a bad thing especially since it's a you fic. Her being basically a Mary Sue in a different form doesn't make it any better... I think if she had some flaws to her it would've been a better read if we got to see her develop during the story.. Please don't be offended by this comment but this is just what I think ^^""

PS. Please don't change the font color to bright/very light colors. It makes the fic hard to read...
inoblee
#4
Chapter 23: I'm going to be honest here so I will seem harsh. Everything happens way too fast and alot of places don't make any sense. For example, it explained that the OC's father is sick in bed but how come he can go out of his room and fire the gun? If he had the energy why didn't he fight with them? And how did the fight end? Also, the OC doesn't have any flaw at all and this makes her whole character fake and un-interesting. Your storys problem wasn't explained and developed well enough. Work hard and don't be offended by my advice.
infinite7myungsooL
#5
Chapter 23: I love it ^^
boy1a4
#6
Chapter 23: This was nice but u know what i hate? The green font.. Its too bright :(
33jjlover
#7
Chapter 22: this was really cute :) im sad that is has to end so soon :(
qsnow94 #8
Chapter 21: please update soon authornim..i want to know what will happen next
33jjlover
#9
Chapter 20: OMG OMG OMG!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!