Trouble Much?

The Darkest Light and a Single Bullet

Seo ____'s POV:

I caught up to Junah, but she already reached my father's room when I was right behind her.

On the bed layed my father, sick and frail.

It had come unexpectedly, but even the strongest are weakened.

There Junah was, ready to kill him.

I couldn't bear to see that.

If he was to pass away, it would be from natural causes.

I charged towards her kicking the knife out of her hand.

She looked at me and smirked malignantly.

"Saving your father?" she taunted with a baby voice.

I rolled my eyes and held my anger in.

That's when we began to fight.

I may have been more muscular, but Junah was more quick.

She would dodge my attacks and throw a couple of her own every once in a while.

Obviously it was an equal fight.

Suddenly the door was flung open and Myungsoo stepped in.

"What did I miss?" he asked stupidly.

Junah took this chance to throw me to the ground.

Before I had the chance to recover, Junah pulled out a silver revolver that was fully loaded.

"Now, now, you better not move a muscle. You don't want your brains blown out do you?" she mocked the both of us.

Damn!

Now what?

She approached my father who had awoken from the loud ruckus we were causing.

His eyes widened slightly, but he didn't seem too surprised that Junah was in front of him.

"Ah, so you came?" he calmly asked.

What is he doing?

Junah pointed the gun at him.

In the corner of my eye, I saw Myungsoo getting ready to move.

3.

2.

1.

He ran towards Junah and I followed suit.

The 3 of us were engaged in combat.

That was until Junah fired towards Myungsoo.

No, no, no!

This couldn't happen.

Without thinking, I blocked the bullet.

It was sent into my shoulder causing a puncture.

BANG!

Junah dropped dead.

We looked behind her and saw my dad holding a small pistol.

"I wasn't going to kill her, but NOBODY touches my daughter," he stated.

That's my dad for you.

I pressed on my wound to stop the blood.

I could still hear fights going on downstairs.

"I'll go handle that," my dad said.

He walked out and sounded 1 empty shot, scaring everyone.

"Get out, you filthy scums. Your first leader is dead. Your second will die in a second. Leave," he shouted and the Dark Shadows scurried out like little mice.

"Why did you take that bullet for me?" Myungsoo whispered, breaking my thoughts.

"I'm not going to let you die. Besides, I'm stronger than you," I scoffed.

"Still, you shouldn't have," he nagged as he started to treat my shoulder.

"So what if I did?" I shot back.

"Because I wouldn't be able to forgive myself then. I like you, okay!" he blew up.

What did he just say?

..........

*blink*

*blink*

Oh..... wow..........

"Then be my boyfriend," I bluntly told him.

His jaw dropped.

"Are you serious?" he questioned.

I rolled my eyes.

"I wouldn't be saying that if I didn't like you," I told him.

Myungsoo broke out into a huge grin, scaring the shiz out of me.

"Okay then! I'm your boyfriend. You can't take back what you said," he excitedly claimed.

I nodded and laughed.

"Hey! Stop moving! You'll damage your shoulder more!" he nagged again.

Gosh, what a weirdo...

But he's MY weirdo.

"You know what? Your my darkest light. Pulling me out of my cold reality even though you count as someone that I was supposed to kill," I muttered.

"If I'm your darkest light, then you're my single bullet. Killing the old me. I'm no longer a flirt or selfish and it's thanks to you," he announced.

With those words, he kissed me.

My first kiss.

And it was amazing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hi! 

I have a question!

Does anyone know a good layout shop that I could use?

And this story is almost coming to an end.

Maybe one more chapter left.

Thanks,

lovegirl098

 

 

 

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xxEXATOxx #1
Chapter 7: Umm, when Myungsoo and the oc met each other at the club, she introduced herself as Minji (a fake name). But when she texted him she signed/ended with her real name, Seo ___. Uhh, whut??
Baby_Natasha #2
Chapter 3: Tbh, I'm having a very hard time reading the 3rd chapter... And from what I read, it's too obvious and too short for each chapter, for the fonts... Don't use too bright colour and also it's a little too small...
cxsmicskies
#3
Hello~ Just gonna telling you something about the fic. Umm.. The girl is really hard to relate with, which is a bad thing especially since it's a you fic. Her being basically a Mary Sue in a different form doesn't make it any better... I think if she had some flaws to her it would've been a better read if we got to see her develop during the story.. Please don't be offended by this comment but this is just what I think ^^""

PS. Please don't change the font color to bright/very light colors. It makes the fic hard to read...
inoblee
#4
Chapter 23: I'm going to be honest here so I will seem harsh. Everything happens way too fast and alot of places don't make any sense. For example, it explained that the OC's father is sick in bed but how come he can go out of his room and fire the gun? If he had the energy why didn't he fight with them? And how did the fight end? Also, the OC doesn't have any flaw at all and this makes her whole character fake and un-interesting. Your storys problem wasn't explained and developed well enough. Work hard and don't be offended by my advice.
infinite7myungsooL
#5
Chapter 23: I love it ^^
boy1a4
#6
Chapter 23: This was nice but u know what i hate? The green font.. Its too bright :(
33jjlover
#7
Chapter 22: this was really cute :) im sad that is has to end so soon :(
qsnow94 #8
Chapter 21: please update soon authornim..i want to know what will happen next
33jjlover
#9
Chapter 20: OMG OMG OMG!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!