The First Text Message

The Darkest Light and a Single Bullet

 

Kim Myungsoo's POV:

That girl from yesterday was so pretty.

I have never seen her in the club.

I really didn't want to go, but now I'm gald I did.

I'm so stupid though!

I gave her my number, but I never got hers.

Ugh!

Now I need to wait for her to text me.

It's so aannoying because she might not even text me!

I've been looking at my phone constantly, looking like an idiot.

................................... Still no response..................................

Aish!

Why am I so attached to her?

I just met her.....

*Buzz*

My phone!!!!

One new message!

It's from...... Sunggyu Hyung.

Damn it!

*Sigh*

Tick tock, tick tock.

Viberate again you damn phone....

*Buzz*

If it's from Sunggyu Hyung again then I swear...

Oh my gosh!

It's from that girl!

Hey,

How are you?

No hangover?

Hehehe. Just kidding!

When you read this message, text back!

I was wondering if you wanna.... you know..... hang out?

~Seo ___

She wants to hang out!

I quickly texted back.

Nope, no hangover!

And sure!

I'd love to hang out!

Where do you want to meet?

I was thinking that we could go to the movies.

What do you say?

~Kim Myungsoo

After a couple minutes, a reply came.

Cool!

I'll meet you there.

The COEX Mall?

~Seo ____

COEX Mall?

Okay that's cool.

Okay!

I'll see you at 2:30 P.M.

~Kim Myungsoo

It's 1:00 P.M right now, so I have about an hour to get ready..

I looked through my closet to find something to wear.

I'm just going to stay my style.

I refuse to wear anything preppy or geeky.

Yuck.

My leather jacket and jeans is fine.

I looked in the mirror and just messed with my hair a bit.

All done.

Gosh!

I still have over a half hour left.

....What to do now?

I the T.V and Mnet Countdown was on.

Oooohhhh!

Who's going to win this week?

What?

Just because I'm a thief/fighter, doesn't mean that I can't be a fanboy.

But, I'm not as bad as Woohyun Hyung and Sungjong.

Woohyun Hyung loves KARA.

Sungjong loves ANY girl group dances.

Like every single one.

It's really scary to see him dance like a girl.

Yesterday, I walked into his room and saw him dancing to TaeTiSeo's Twinkle.

That scarred me for life.....

I checked the clock again, 2:00 P.M.

Yes!

It's time to go and meet my beautiful date!

I drove to the mall and listened to Teen Top's Beautiful Girl.

Well, I am going to see a beautiful girl.

Kekekeke!

I parked in the garage and went to the movie theater.

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xxEXATOxx #1
Chapter 7: Umm, when Myungsoo and the oc met each other at the club, she introduced herself as Minji (a fake name). But when she texted him she signed/ended with her real name, Seo ___. Uhh, whut??
Baby_Natasha #2
Chapter 3: Tbh, I'm having a very hard time reading the 3rd chapter... And from what I read, it's too obvious and too short for each chapter, for the fonts... Don't use too bright colour and also it's a little too small...
cxsmicskies
#3
Hello~ Just gonna telling you something about the fic. Umm.. The girl is really hard to relate with, which is a bad thing especially since it's a you fic. Her being basically a Mary Sue in a different form doesn't make it any better... I think if she had some flaws to her it would've been a better read if we got to see her develop during the story.. Please don't be offended by this comment but this is just what I think ^^""

PS. Please don't change the font color to bright/very light colors. It makes the fic hard to read...
inoblee
#4
Chapter 23: I'm going to be honest here so I will seem harsh. Everything happens way too fast and alot of places don't make any sense. For example, it explained that the OC's father is sick in bed but how come he can go out of his room and fire the gun? If he had the energy why didn't he fight with them? And how did the fight end? Also, the OC doesn't have any flaw at all and this makes her whole character fake and un-interesting. Your storys problem wasn't explained and developed well enough. Work hard and don't be offended by my advice.
infinite7myungsooL
#5
Chapter 23: I love it ^^
boy1a4
#6
Chapter 23: This was nice but u know what i hate? The green font.. Its too bright :(
33jjlover
#7
Chapter 22: this was really cute :) im sad that is has to end so soon :(
qsnow94 #8
Chapter 21: please update soon authornim..i want to know what will happen next
33jjlover
#9
Chapter 20: OMG OMG OMG!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!