Him Again?!?!!

The Darkest Light and a Single Bullet

 

Seo ____'s POV:

I woke up early today for some reason.

I just had the urge to.

It's probably because I never slept in.

I always woke up before the sunrise.

For some reason, my room felt stuffy and suffocating, so I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and put on a track suit.

My hair was tied into a pony tail and I was out the door.

Near the apartment was a gym that was open 24 hours a day.

Perfect.

I went inside and signed up for a membership.

When I was all ready, I went into the gym.

Since it was 4:00 A.M, it was pretty much deserted.

No one was there and all of the machines were ready to be used.

Awesome.

I don't have to deal with any people right now.

There's no one to bother me.

I first went to the treadmill and started to jog lightly.

Then, I increased the spped till I was on a full speed sprint.

I  heard the machine next to me moving.

Turning my head, I saw a man running on it.

A very familiar guy.

It was Kim Myungsoo or L  that was next to me.

"Hey," Myungsoo said.

I had my earbuds in, so I pretended that I couldn't because of my music.

He's so annoying! 

He appears everywhere I go.

Is he.... A STALKER!?!?!!?

Then Myungsoo decided to tap me on the shoulder.

I secretly rolled my eyes, and turned my head.

"Oh hi Myungsoo! You come to this gym, too?" I asked.

He nodded and I silently sighed.

Gosh, I should really cancel this membership and go to a new gym.

"Oh okay. Well I'm going to go to another machine," I excused myself.

I left the treadmill and went to the rowing machines.

I thought that Myungsoo would stay and keep running, but instead he followed me.

He followed me to every exercise I did.

When I was finished, he decided to ask me out to breakfast.

I didn't want to be rude, so I just agreed.

I went to the women's locker room to wash up.

I walked out and Myungsoo was waiting for me.

"Um so where are we going?" I questioned.

"I know a really nice place that has awesome food," Myungsoo explained.

I nodded and he led the way.

It was a nice quiet walk and it was surprisingly comfortable.

A smile spread on my face as I breathed the fresh air.

Kim Myungsoo's POV:

I snuck a look towards ____.

She looked so peaceful and happy.

Our shoulders were next to each other and we walked side by side.

What an angel she is.

I know that I've done many sins and I will in the future, but it must be some blessing to have ____.

I looked at our hands and they were so close.

If I moved a centimeter closer, our hands wold be touching.

This is it, Myungsoo.

I inched closer and swiftly took her hand into mine.

____ looked suprised by didn't let go.

Her hands were warm, but they weren't soft.

They felt rough like a person that does physical labor.

But that doesn't matter.

It's her heart that does.

If only I could hold her hand for 100 no 1000 years.

Then I would feel complete.

Do you ever have that feeling like your half empty, but then someone comes and fills that empty space?

I do.

Right now with ____ by my side.
 

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xxEXATOxx #1
Chapter 7: Umm, when Myungsoo and the oc met each other at the club, she introduced herself as Minji (a fake name). But when she texted him she signed/ended with her real name, Seo ___. Uhh, whut??
Baby_Natasha #2
Chapter 3: Tbh, I'm having a very hard time reading the 3rd chapter... And from what I read, it's too obvious and too short for each chapter, for the fonts... Don't use too bright colour and also it's a little too small...
cxsmicskies
#3
Hello~ Just gonna telling you something about the fic. Umm.. The girl is really hard to relate with, which is a bad thing especially since it's a you fic. Her being basically a Mary Sue in a different form doesn't make it any better... I think if she had some flaws to her it would've been a better read if we got to see her develop during the story.. Please don't be offended by this comment but this is just what I think ^^""

PS. Please don't change the font color to bright/very light colors. It makes the fic hard to read...
inoblee
#4
Chapter 23: I'm going to be honest here so I will seem harsh. Everything happens way too fast and alot of places don't make any sense. For example, it explained that the OC's father is sick in bed but how come he can go out of his room and fire the gun? If he had the energy why didn't he fight with them? And how did the fight end? Also, the OC doesn't have any flaw at all and this makes her whole character fake and un-interesting. Your storys problem wasn't explained and developed well enough. Work hard and don't be offended by my advice.
infinite7myungsooL
#5
Chapter 23: I love it ^^
boy1a4
#6
Chapter 23: This was nice but u know what i hate? The green font.. Its too bright :(
33jjlover
#7
Chapter 22: this was really cute :) im sad that is has to end so soon :(
qsnow94 #8
Chapter 21: please update soon authornim..i want to know what will happen next
33jjlover
#9
Chapter 20: OMG OMG OMG!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!