chapter 58

It Started with a Promise
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 Key's POV

 We went to the nearest chicken restaurant. Since Mika insisted of treating Onew-hyung a bucket full of chicken.

 "Let's sit over there." I said pointing at the table near the glass wall.

 We sat there and a waiter approached us.

 "May I take your order sir?" he asked us politely.

 "One whole roasted chicken and two lasagna." I replied.

 "One moment sir." then he left.

 "Can't wait for the chicken~" Onew said excitedly, "Chicken Dong Chicken Dong Chick chick chick Chicken Dong~" he sings along with our song Ring Ding Dong (A/N: from OMS)

 "Hyung stop singing that, it irritates me ." I said.

 "What's wrong with that? It suits our song." Onew said.

 "Here's your order sir." the waiter returned, placing our order on the table , "Is there anything you need sir?" he asked.

 "Nothing , thanks." I motioned away the waiter.

 We started eating, I saw Onew gobbling up the chicken. He sure is a maniac.

 "Oppa, slow down you might choke." Mika said.

 But Onew keeps on eating too fast.

 "Onew-hyung , how do you eat your chicken tastefully?" I asked.

 He looked at me while munching , "No time for that." he said. (A/N: I just remember this from HB)

 "Yah! You guys are so dead! Eating without us!" We heard Jonghyun's voice.

 I turned around and saw them behind me.

 "Yeobo, how could you?" Jonghyun started to act.

 "Yeobo your face, just sit down and order for yourself." I said.

 "Taeminnie, go pick what you want. My treat." Mika said.

 "Really?" Taemin smiled, and Mika nodded.

 "Ani, I'm not letting a girl pay for our food." I said.

 "So you're gonna pay for the bill?" Minho asked.

 "Do I have a choice?" I asked.

 "Yeobo is so kind." Mika smiled at me.

 I smiled at her too. Why can't I resist her charms?

 After eating we decided to go at the Karaoke bar.

 "Let's sing!" Onew said.

 "I'll pick the song." Jonghyun said.

 Mika and I just sat at the couch, watching them sing.

 "Key, try to dance Kara's dance." Jonghy

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Issdnn
#1
Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^
locketblingermvp #3
Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm
kekeSHINee
#4
Chapter 23: Ur description is perfect... Can i ask u to help my first story which i oni update til 1/3 of chapter 3
YunYing
#5
Woah! Yup updated 11 chapters a day? That's so amazing!!!
YunYing
#6
Awww, I really LOVE this story!
Michellesofjan #7
kyaa i really love this story
Bright5
#8
I love this story^^
alyssa27 #9
It's getting more and more and more exciting..... Love this story!
SISA95
#10
Nice Story Or should i say AMAZING!!!<br />
i like it so much i finished it just in two days ^^ <br />
KEEP IT UP :)