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It Started with a Promise
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Mika's POV

 Everything seems to be normal, two days passed as if nothing happened inside the dressing room. I haven't heard anything from Jessica or any other SNSD unnies. Somehow I am relieved.

 "Mika, we're going out for a walk, wanna come with us?" Onew yelled.

 "Yeah, sure be there in a minute." I replied, grabbed my phone, wallet and my coat since it's cold.

 I went down and saw them dress up in disguise. I chuckled.

 "What?" Key asked.

 "You all look different." I said.

 "What do you mean? We all need to disguise so no one will notice us." Onew said.

 "Okay." I said, "But what's with the mask thing?"

 "To cover our face." Jonghyun replied.

 "Sheesh, it sure is hard to be an idol." I said.

 "You bet, we can't do what other normal people do." Taemin said.

 "Time is running, let's go to the mall now." Minho said.

 When we arrive at the mall, it looks like I am with the weird ones. People keep on looking at us. They sure are grabbing some attentions. Who wouldn't be curious? Idols usual get up during free time or they are chilling out is this. A hoodie, sun glass, face mask. I can even hear them murmur like, 'who is that?' 'maybe an idol' 'from which group could it be?'

 I turned around to face them, "Hey guys, you all are catching a lot of attentions you know." I said.

 "Just ignore them they'll get over it." Key said.

 After ten minutes.

 "RUN!" Jonghyun shouted.

 "Run faster Taemin! Onew-hyung faster don't be clumsy or else!" Minho yelled.

 "Mika, can you keep it up?" Key asked me while we were running,

 "Yeah! I told you that you guys are catching too much attention!" I said running.

 "Over here!" Taemin shouted.

 We hide behind the bush.

 "Where are they?" I heard a girls voice.

 "I think they run that way." another girl said.

 When they are out of sight, we stood up and out of the bush.

 "You guys don't listen to me." I said.

 "I know, we are wrong and you are right." Key said.

 "Let's go over there, you guys need to change." I said pointing at a cheap clothes store.

 "You guys pick simple clothes that are not too catchy." I said.

 "Ne." they answered in unison.

 They spent thirty minutes picking which clothes to wear.

 "What do you think?" Minho asked. He wears a white t-shirt with a blazer on, a cap and a thick eye glass.  (A/N: minho just imagine an eye glass.)

 "Looks good on you." I said.

 Then I saw Onew and Taemin. Onew wearing a black sando top with a checkered polo. (A/N: click)
Taemin wearing a simple t-shirt and jeans (A/N: this is his brother taesung)

 "You guys still look gorgeous." I uttered.

 Jonghyun wearing a skinny black jeans, black shirt and a black hat (A/N: imagine jjong's black hair)

 "Still stunning am I?" Jonghyun smirked.

 "You're not." I said.

 He smiled, a devilish smile, "Admit it Mika, my charms are still working o

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Issdnn
#1
Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^
locketblingermvp #3
Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm
kekeSHINee
#4
Chapter 23: Ur description is perfect... Can i ask u to help my first story which i oni update til 1/3 of chapter 3
YunYing
#5
Woah! Yup updated 11 chapters a day? That's so amazing!!!
YunYing
#6
Awww, I really LOVE this story!
Michellesofjan #7
kyaa i really love this story
Bright5
#8
I love this story^^
alyssa27 #9
It's getting more and more and more exciting..... Love this story!
SISA95
#10
Nice Story Or should i say AMAZING!!!<br />
i like it so much i finished it just in two days ^^ <br />
KEEP IT UP :)