First Encounter

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At the airport..

Mika's POV

"Yoboseyo? Oppa ! Neh, I'm already here in Korea, so good to be back. No,
you don't have to pick me up here I know that you're busy. Neh, I'm staying
at a hotel. Don't worry about me, I'll be fine. Bye." I ended our conversation.
"I better be get going, I'm too tired" I said.

Minho's POV

At the dressing room..

"Neh, Mika you arrived? Want me to pick you up? Then where are you going to stay?
I know you don't have any relatives here. Take care of yourself, Bye. Hey be
sure to ---- " she hung up. I guess she's tired.

"Yah ! Minho-hyung, who you talking to?" asked Taemin.

"One of my friend who used to live in Japan but decided to return here in Korea"
I answered.

"Yah ! Minho, I didn't know you have a friend!" Jongyun said.

"Ofcourse I have some friends, what do you think of me? Remeber when I was sent to
Japan for a fashion show? We met there and became good friends." I said.

Suddenly Onew shouted to us, " Yah ! I still have some things to do, you guys
go home without me and Key".

"Hyung, where are you going?" asked Taemin.

"We still have some business to accomplish, we need to meet up with our manager
to talk about certain things" Key answered back.<

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Issdnn #1 Jul 12, 2015 08:57:59

Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡

-2Mirae- ^{14 streak} #2 Aug 4, 2013 18:05:41

Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^

locketblingermvp #3 Jul 4, 2013 10:58:38

Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm