The Situation

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mika's POV

I was about to say sorry but then,
"The hell ! You spilled a coffee into my shirt! How careless, you should be looking
to where you're heading to" said the guy.

I thought he would help me up since he's the one ho bumped into me. But instead he
shouted at me and blamed me for what happened, how ungentle!

I stood up and looked at him and said, "How dare you speak to me like that! After all
this was all your fault!"

Key's POV

I bumped onto this girl and she spilled her coffee into my shirt, damn it's too hot.
"The hell ! You spilled a coffee into my shirt! How careless, you should be looking
to where you're heading to" I said.

I didn't help her to get up coz I was really mad. She stood up and said, "How dare
you speak to me like that! After all this was all your fault!" she said.

She looked into my eyes, yes she's pretty, her dark brown hair, her pinkish lips,
her expressive eyes.

"You should apologize to me." she snapped me.

"Why should I be sorry? You're the one to blame!" I said.

Suddenly someone pulled me out.

"Sorry for what happened, please forgive my friend" Onew said politely.

"Yah! Whay are you asking her forgiveness? It's her fault!" I said.

"Be quiet Key! Stop maki

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Issdnn #1 Jul 12, 2015 08:57:59

Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡

-2Mirae- ^{14 streak} #2 Aug 4, 2013 18:05:41

Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^

locketblingermvp #3 Jul 4, 2013 10:58:38

Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm