It's You

It Started with a Promise
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Key's POV

 Still, I can't believe it. I had been sitting on my bed for hours. All of the questions in my mind has now been solved. I now remember everything.

 I heard a knock on my door. I stood up and look who it was.

 I opened the door and saw Mika standing in front of me. I now know why she looks familiar, not just because I've seen her in some commercials or fashion show but because she still look the same. That cute face, the eyes, nose and lips.

 "Oppa, time to eat." she said.

 "Uh- yeah." I said

 "The others went to their schedule." she said, "how come you, the Almighty Key have no schedules today?" she asked.

 "I-I don't know." I replied.

 "Come on, let's eat." she said.

 "Okay." I followed her.

 Come on Key, act normal. So what if she's the girl you had been waiting for. Wait, should i tell her? I mean, she had a some sort of amnesia. She had forgotten her past when she was young, that means she had forgotten me too. What will happen? Would she believe in me? Nothing will happen, I guess.
She would never broke up with Jonghyun. I was from the past, Jonghyun is Mika's present, what matters to her right now is her feelings towards Jonghyun right now.

 "Oppa, why are you so quiet?" she asked me.

 "Nothing, I didn't sleep well last night." I replied while finishing the soup.

 "I see, you better get some rest." she said.

 "Mika, you have forgotten too many things right? And you still can't remember it all?" I asked.

 "Well, yeah. Why?" she asked.

 "Nothing." I stood up and went back to my room and so I could think.

Mika's POv

 What's with him? Does he have any problems? Days had passed and since then he was acting so really really weird. There was even a time when he asked me if I already remember everything, if there's something I remember.

 One day, I was cleaning my room when he knocked. I opened it and he asked me once again.

 "Do you remember anything now?" he asked.

 "Oppa, what is it that you want me to remember?" I asked.

 "It's just that I'm kinda curious about your past." he said.

 "Why?" I asked.

 "When you told me your story, I wanna know everything about you. Since I'm your oppa there's no wrong with that right?"  he said.

 "Well, if I remember anything, I promise that I will tell you." she said.

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Issdnn
#1
Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^
locketblingermvp #3
Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm
kekeSHINee
#4
Chapter 23: Ur description is perfect... Can i ask u to help my first story which i oni update til 1/3 of chapter 3
YunYing
#5
Woah! Yup updated 11 chapters a day? That's so amazing!!!
YunYing
#6
Awww, I really LOVE this story!
Michellesofjan #7
kyaa i really love this story
Bright5
#8
I love this story^^
alyssa27 #9
It's getting more and more and more exciting..... Love this story!
SISA95
#10
Nice Story Or should i say AMAZING!!!<br />
i like it so much i finished it just in two days ^^ <br />
KEEP IT UP :)