Hate !

It Started with a Promise
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 Key's POV

 When I entered our house Taemin is playing his Wii together with Minho, Onew
is eatning his chicken we all knew that he loves chicken more than anything. Only
Jonghyun saw me standing.

 "Key, you're home too early. Fininsh with your exercise? Or did something happened?"
he asked smiling at me.

 "Sort of, don't ask what happened to me this morning." I said in an annoyed tone.

 "Ow, c'mon yeobo, you know I'm worried about you. Spill it out." he smiled even more.

 "Well this girl I've been talking about you last night .." I paused when I heard Onew-hyung's
sudden laugh.

 "Go on?" Jonghyun said impatiently.

 "I saw her today" I said, "After spilling latte onto my shirt, I sat on a cup of latte again
and it's becausee of her again!" I bursted out my feelings!

 "You mean that pretty girl whom you bumped into and you blamed her because you said it was her
fault, you didn't even help her to get up. You didn't say sorry to her, instead you shouted at her"
Onew looking at me while he is munching on his chicken.

 "Yah! It's NOT MY FAULT ! It was her fault !! Onew-Hyung are you on her side? " I yelled at him.

 "Yah ! Don't yell at your hyung! I'm older than you! You know that you're at the wrong and yet you
didn't apologize to her, it was I who asked for her forgiveness last night" Onew said keeping his calm voice.

 "But --" jonghyun interrupted me, "Key, you better take a shower so you won't smell latte anymore.
And it will help you cool down your hot head"

 "Will you guys keep it down? We're doing some business here !" Minho shouted at us, we know that
he needs a quiet place to keep his focus on the game.

 "Ugh..!" I started making my way towards my room, I'll take a quick shower. Damn! That girl
really pisses me off. Just thinking of her makes my blood boil! I hate that girl from the bottom
of my precious heart ! She should be the one saying sorry to me, I as the Almighty Key shouldn't
be sorry for anything!

 Minho's POV

 "Onew-hyung, what time is it?" I asked while my eyes

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Issdnn
#1
Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^
locketblingermvp #3
Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm
kekeSHINee
#4
Chapter 23: Ur description is perfect... Can i ask u to help my first story which i oni update til 1/3 of chapter 3
YunYing
#5
Woah! Yup updated 11 chapters a day? That's so amazing!!!
YunYing
#6
Awww, I really LOVE this story!
Michellesofjan #7
kyaa i really love this story
Bright5
#8
I love this story^^
alyssa27 #9
It's getting more and more and more exciting..... Love this story!
SISA95
#10
Nice Story Or should i say AMAZING!!!<br />
i like it so much i finished it just in two days ^^ <br />
KEEP IT UP :)