A Second Chance

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"Before he got close enough to be heard, the ground burst in front of him. Flames rolled towards the sky and at the large lump at Shishi’s feet. The fur burnt quickly but the flesh and fat sizzled. The fire was tall and the tips flickered against the polluted air. The dirt beneath was becoming black and embers floated around the burning mass, dying seconds after liberty from the flames."

Foreword

Alright people....this is my Matoki fanfic. It's a story that I set on Mato and is before they came to earth. 

Enjoy~!!! :D

Note: Some chapters will be rated M for either violence or language. Poster courtesy of -himechan and Matoki Island Poster Shop <3

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whitestallion #1
Chapter 28: yay (: i like the ending and i'll look forward to the sequel (: I love commenting on your fic because you reply me :x i like it when authors do! sometimes i do'nt comment because they dont lol. i'm sorry. i'm sorta ranting here, a little :B hahaha. but yeah! I will wait for the sequel (: i think i'm subscribed to some of your other stories too...so update those as well ;) and if you've got time...read mine too? xD *shameless promoting as well* they're sorta action-y B.A.P fics so i'm not sure if you'll like them.
fighting! ^^
vortex234 #2
Chapter 28: that was a nice ending. :3 I'm glad you were able to finish it nicely. I'm looking forward to the sequel. (After Never Give Up of course, thats my favorite :D)
whitestallion #3
Chapter 27: oh! so quickly an ending? but i will look forward to the sequel! Your story is so well written^^
whitestallion #4
Chapter 26: well its been some time ;) but i'm happy you're back! when you update i'll probably go back and reread the previous chapter to refresh my memory. but so far what i can remember is that shishi is dying! or in trouble. anyway. i will look forward to the sequel! can't wait for the next chapter^^
whitestallion #5
Chapter 25: wow your writing is super cool! the descriptions are a little too much so i get lost sometimes, but other than that its good :) i don't really get the front part, how did shishi kill the tyrant? can he use fire or something? (and please don't let him die because yongguk is my bias >< haha :P ) also, i would really like a sequel :) yeah that's all i have to say! waiting for the next update! :D
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