Unacceptable Love

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“WHERE ARE WE GOING??!!!” I shouted out to the mysterious man who is holding my hand and running with me.

“I don’t know.” he replied.

“WHAT THE HECK??!!!” I yelled out as I look at him.

“Ahhhhh!!!!” the mysterious guy shouted out as I heard a gunshot and he fell to the ground.

“Yah!!! Are you okay??!!” I ask as I got down and look at the guy. Right at that moment, 3 cars appear in front of us.

“Go away.” the guy said as push me away.

“No. You save me, so this time I have to save you.” I said as I grab one of his arms and put it over my shoulder and help him stand up.

“Can you run?” I ask as I got up and see one of the cars racing towards us.

“Yeah.” He said as he clutch onto his wound on his hip.

“Ok. RUN!!!” I shouted out as I held onto his other side and ran wherever our feet took us.

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Characters:

 

Hwang Mina (No Picture)

  • 16 years old
  • Junior
  • Work at SnowFlakes Café
  • Mood depends on the day weather and on the person’s attitude they are giving her
  • Hidden Background
  • Live in an apartment
  • Have 2 best friends name Minhee(Junior), and Jenna(Junior)

 

Kai

  • Alien from EXO Planet
  • Unknown Age
  • Unknown Background
  • Have 12 brothers
  • Power: Teleportation
  • Came to Earth on accident
  • Is being chase by scientists
  • Is usually happy around Mina but whenever she is not there he could be as mean as a monster

 

Minor Characters:

 

Luhan

  • Alien from EXO Planet
  • Unknown Age
  • Unknown Background
  • Have 12 brothers
  • Power: Telekinesis
  • Came to Earth with Suho, Kris, Lay, and Baekhyun to find Kai
  • Very nice and caring but he can be a devil whenever he wants to

 

Suho, Kris, Lay, and Baekhyun

Kim Suho

  • Caring and loveable Leader of Exo-K
  • Power: Water

 

Wu Fan or Kris

  • Hot and annoying Leader of Exo-M
  • Power: Flight

 

Zhang Yi Xing

  • Power: Healing
  • Shy and cute Alien

 

Byun Baekhyun

  • Power: Light
  • Adorable and thoughtful Alien

 

 

Lee Minhee

  • Oldest out of Jenna and Mina
  • Rich
  • Very nice, caring, and funny
  • Very popluar
  • Most helpful whenever whenever you need help on everything: love problems, homworks, etcs.....

 

Choi Jenna

  • The younges out of Jenna and Mina
  • Sometimes a brat because she is rich and immature
  • Is a player and very popluar
  • Whenever she meets a guy and like him, she will do ANYTHING to get him
  • Most helpful whenever you need a guy

 

 

Foreword

Brief Summary:

 

     One day when Mina was coming home from school, she was almost run over but was saved from a mysterious guy. As they were running for their lives, he got shot. In able to save him Mina have to either take him to the hospital and get kill sooner or go to her house where she could cure him but not have the best medicine, but at least he will live. Would Mina also risk her life just to save a guy? Who is this mysterious guy? Why are these people chasing him? Would those guys find them again? Will the mysterious guy’s brothers save him on time or will he die? What happens if one of your friends fell in love with the guy? Will your friendship be ruin? Read this story to find out.

 

 

Author's Note:

I am back with my 4th fanfic. In this fanfic, I will be featuring Kai and you. For this fanfic, it is also another contest story. Since English is not my first language, there will some grammar and spellings mistakes.

 

 

My Other Stories:

 

Infinite: Just To Get A Soul, You Are Using Me

 

Exo: Time Is Ticking

 

Dalmatian: A Battle for You

 

 

Started the Foreword on July 31, 2012

Started the Brief Paragraph on July 31, 2012

Started Characters on July 30, 2012

Started story on laptop on August 1, 2012

Posted this story on Asianfanfics on August 6, 2012

Main Song: E.T. by Katy Perry

Storyline by: littleocean

Poster by: PickledBeauty

Background by: littleocean

Main Characters: You and Kai

Minor Characters: Luhan, Suho, Kris, Lay, Baekhyun, Jenna, Minhee, and some other people

Story End on: 8/24/2012

Finish Typing on Computer on: 8/21/2012

 

 

PLEASE DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!!!!!!

 

 
littleocean
Please do vote on the poll on the final chapter. Thank you!!!

Comments

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Maria_Maraki
#1
Chapter 11: Omo I'm so sad :'( but was beautiful story!!
yeojafan
#2
the story is awesome authornim!
exokm88
#3
Chapter 8: I love your story! :) This story is a lot like another story(well series) I've read called, "Beautiful Creatures" by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl. Have you heard of it? I couldn't help but notice a few similarities. If you haven't read it then it's actually an amazing series.
kawaiikai #4
Chapter 14: This was such a sweet story! I cried at the end :') I didnt want it to end.
aerissiii
#5
Chapter 11: waa! *wiping my tears*
i loved the ending! not all love stories have a happy ending. good thing you didn't decide to make a sequel, i wanna keep the ending that way. xD
aerissiii
#6
Chapter 2: wow. just wow. she just met kai and she's letting him sleep beside her. lol. xD
MitsuKyuYamazaki #7
Chapter 15: Kai.... D'X

But cool story tough~
turquoise_star8 #8
Chapter 15: KAI DEAD!!!????
turquoise_star8 #9
Chapter 15: Hey! 8 december is my birthday!!!! :D
Meky_19 #10
Chapter 11: I was cry bcoz of that story is really sad and romance i love it and thank you for write this fanfic and again thank you