What I saw

Thank the Cake (No Guarantee of End)

Authors note:

I have added another point of view to the story. This is Doojoons point of view and it recounts the past chapter through his eyes.


(Doojoons POV)

The girl emerged from the building and a small gust of wind blew a strand of hair across her face. She turned her head away from the wind and tucked it behind her ear. Suddenly she stiffened. Someone was running towards her. She looked at AJ and then shifted her gaze back to the approaching figure. Don't get in the car. Don't get in the car! I watched as she gave AJ one last desperate look and then took off down the pavement. AJ's mouth dropped open as he saw her sprint by.

"Wow!"

The guy was gaining on her. This couldn't end well. I jerked open the car door and ran after them. Surprisingly no one noticed me in my pursuit. The girl dashed around a corner and I heard a faint cry and a loud thump that sounded like it was against metal. I peered around the corner. She was leaning against the brick wall close to a large metal dumpster clutching her side. I guess she ran into it. The guy walked over to stand in front of her. This couldn't be good.

"Noona, you didn't have to run so far. No one followed us." Did she know him? Her eyes spoke fear. Would that be a no? His hands moved till one was holding hers and one was on her waist. He breathed something into her ear and I saw her tense up. The scarf covering her face was being pulled away by his hand which had left her hand and I saw her try to push him away making a muffled noise. He started trying to pull her dress up and I started forward. Suddenly he was on the ground and I realized she had kneed him where it counts. I cringed and mentally noted it. He was gasping and trying to say something. She gripped his chin and jerked it around to face her. What is she doing? Her face was no longer covered by the scarf and I wondered why she was letting him see her. They seemed to be having an exchange and he grabbed her wrist. She was saying something to him but winced when his grip tightened. Suddenly he let go and stood up. I noticed that she was holding her phone and wondered what she was doing. His wallet was in her hands when I looked back up and she took a picture of something in it and then of him. Handing his wallet back to him she walked out of the alley. Why wasn't he following her? What was going on? After putting his wallet back in his pocket, the guy started to exit the alley. So he was going to follow her. I walked up behind him and tapped him on the shoulder. He shouldn't be let off that easily.


I opened the door of the car and climbed back into the back seat.

"What happened?" AJ asked.

"I'm not sure." I replied. It wasn't completely a lie.

We drove to the corner store where we were supposed to meet Hyunseung and waited. After a while he appeared carrying the girl. What had happened? Her eyes are closed. Did she pass out? AJ hopped out of the car and opened the door. She was set in the middle seat and Hyunseung joined us in the back. She didn't seem hurt but she definitely wasn't awake. It must be shock. I couldn't help but wonder what had happened between the last time I had seen her and now. She was an attractive girl and I found myself slightly jealous of the guy whose head now leaned against the side of the car in peaceful sleep. Her head was resting on his leg and as the car started moving the same piece of hair she had tucked behind her ear fell across her face. I caught myself staring at her and looked away out of the window.

After a while I found my thoughts wandering back to what I had seen in the alley. What was on her phone? I looked back at her. Her purse was there, by her feet. Looking to see if AJ was watching I reached down and slipped her phone out. I quickly glanced at Hyunseung before pushing the button to turn the screen on. She hadn't closed the feature she had last used... Audio record? I plugged my ear buds into the jack at the base of her phone and pushed play.

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live_laugh_love
#1
Chapter 1: This is really interesting! I couldn't help but squeal when Yoseob appeared xDD (he's my bias :DDD) keep up the awesome work! ^^
JyooLiang
#2
Chapter 17: wow your writing skills improve through the chapters ^^ Keep going your hard work FIGHTING !!
I'm looking forward an update soon
eun1mi #3
i love it :) hoping for the next chapp soon. <3
MelinaRose #4
Thank you iheartbeast and rawrimadinosaur! I'm sorry it takes me such a long time to update. Thank you all for bearing with me.
iheartbeast
#5
:)
daehyunxrawr
#6
Niice story <3
MelinaRose #7
Hey guys *embarassed* I haven't worked on this story in a REALLY long time but I just started again today. I needed to have some idea of where it was going to go next and I just didn't know yet. Hopefully I will have the next part up soonish? I'm still crazy busy. Thank you for subscribing to all my new readers and welcome!<br />
I hope to have something for you in the near future.
AllyluvsSHINee1
#8
Awwwwwww! Cute story! Luv it! Hope I see more hyunseung in the story! :) update soon ~ <3
WuShi07
#9
Hi, I'm your new reader :) and I love this!!! xD I wish Alyse could have more scene with Hyunseung :P Please update soon <3