Invisible Minds

Description

This entire story is in Jongup's point of view. The words in italic are spoken by the matokis.

 

Currently revealed characters and their types, in order of appearance:

Jongup - Light.

Zelo - Water.

Yong Guk - Fire.

Him Chan - Wind.

Daehyun - Earth.

 

[credits to  Fantasja () for finding the foreword picture]

Foreword

You know how some people have the third eye ability to see ghosts and stuff? Well, I have something like that too I guess. Ever since I was little, I could see something that everyone else couldn't.

Toki. Otherwise known as a rabbit. Weird right?

But this isn't your ordinary rabbit. This rabbit, was black. Well, maybe other rabbits were black too, but this rabbit could walk on two legs and he could talk. His name is Dadamato, he told me that he was a Matoki from Planet Mato. He told me that he and I, have a special bond. No one could ever break that bond no matter how hard they try. I guess he's right. Ever since I was little, I could see Dada. I would play with him all the time and whenever I told people about him, they said that he was just my 'imaginary friend' . He would always be there with me whenever I was sad or lonely. He would never leave me alone till I felt better. He would tell me what's on his mind and I would do the same. 

But recently, Dada has been acting strange, and when I asked him what's wrong one day, all he said was: They're here.

 

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sapphirefrogeggs13
276 streak #1
Chapter 3: I'm a little confused, but enjoying this so far! I'll come back to read more :0
Cassi_cool22 #2
Chapter 10: This is not borig at all!!! probably the best matoki fic I've read!! and trust me I have read a lot and looked for a lot too but they were all one shots that left me wating more but were completed this fic also leave me wanting more but it is not finished! continue it whenever you feel like it or when you have more insperation for it! it doesn't have to become a fic! On the contrary it makes it even better and m ore realistic if you have one gay caracter! Sometimes I read fics and everybody in the group are gay and sometimes I can't help but think what are the odds that 6 men are placed in the same group and they are all gay? but with one or two it makes it more realistic! even if the matokis and power is not supposed to be realistic but it makes it eve more interesting!! okay I'm gonna shut up now... I know it's been a while but I know how you feel about this fic but if you don't feel like finishing it I won't be mad! because I know that if you don't feel like finishing a story but you force yourself to finish it, it's not going to be as good as you want it to be. Anyway, just wanted to say that I love this fic but I won't hold it against you if you decided not to finish it!
lilaclemonade
#3
- still looking for a coauthor, please message me -
ozwalkr #4
Chapter 10: This is in NO WAY boring! I love what you have done by integrating the matokis into the story. BAP was awesome in concert in Dallas btw. Just cause you are feeling another storyline right now, don't delete this. The real reason you are slower to get votes for this one is cause a HUGE portion of the AFF fanbase is all about EXO. Thats all well and good, but I prefer my BAP and Big Bang... I really hope you consider doing this justice. Its a good start to something that could be great.
avylol08
#5
Chapter 10: *blink blink* that was amazing..... Sudden surprised me but that was awesome xD Daehyuns got some issues lol he almost suddenly seemed like a possessive girl xD which reminds me! Isn't keke the one that looks like a girl under his suit? Lol that's ironic xD this really is an awesome story lol
stephani_bap #6
Chapter 10: anyway i'm new reader^^
stephani_bap #7
Chapter 10: WOW! i really LOVE this story unnie! please, don't delete this story coz i want to read it until the end. i'll upvote this story and subscribe because i love it!!^^
Fantasja
#8
Chapter 10: You have my sword! And my bow! And my pen with an ink!
I know the feeling of being at lost with inspiration - which author doesn't - so keep your promise, and don't force anything stupid. IM is great and the lack of response may be due to, at least in my case, rarer checking aff.
I also like your flow of keeping this story away from the gay, I mean.. It's not this often to see main story line concetrated around adventure without much influance of love-like-interactions. You're great for doing that.
And about dreams - I'm hard Daehyun stan, but from time to time I dream about Youngjae. It happened to me twice already and I find it weird, but that doen't bring me away from Daehyun, so.. Doesn't dreaming about your bias doesn't make you any less stan of him/her.
I love you, precious, don't matter "which fandom is your main fandom".
hyunhyun95
#9
Chapter 9: Hey. I'm a new reader here. Your story is awesome... Update soon~~
AshXIII #10
Chapter 9: Oooh, update. (rubs hands together mischievously) And do my eyes deceive me.....DaeDae's having the hots for JongUppie...even better. (chuckles)