Secrets.

Invisible Minds

'Aish, this is just too much.'

I stood at the door of my room. There was rubbish everywhere. My clothes had all been taken out from my cupboard, books thrown on the floor and litter, ugh, all that litter. It had to be him, besides, only both of us live here. I kicked away the pile of rubbish as I walked towards my bed.

There he was, sleeping.

You could imagine how angry I was, and for me, being angry wasn't really my thing unless of course you did something to piss me off. I shook him till he woke up. 

'Yah! Why did you do this? My clothes, my books and all this rubbish, they're all over the place! What on Earth were you thinking?!'  I stared at him waiting for an answer.

But he just looked at me in the eye, without a word.

That's right, I forgot that he couldn't speak. Ever since he appeared in my life, he had never spoken a word. Nothing. Not even a sound. He would only look at me, and somehow, just somehow, I could hear his thoughts. Weird isn't it? It's like mind reading I guess. Or maybe it's because he's been with me long enough for me to read his expressions. Well, I don't really know about that. Besides, he's been around every since.. forever. I softened my stare. 

'I know you want to play but this isn't how you play. Not with my clothes. Not with my school books,' I picked up a banana peel. 'And definitely not with food.' He jumped and hugged me. It made me feel better in a way. He was only a meter tall, his head only reached my knee. He got down, and looked at me,

Dada is sorry Jongup, but something was disturbing Dada and Dada was trying to find a way to keep calm.. Dada won't do it again, Dada will help Jongup clean up the mess. 

I smiled and we started cleaning. It took hours to put all my clothes back in my cupboard, books back on my table and to throw all the rubbish away. We lay down on my bed.

I suddenly remembered what Dada said earlier, he mentioned that something was disturbing him? What did he mean by something? I decided to ask. I turned to Dada and said, 'Hey Dada, what did you mean just now when you said something  was disturbing you?'

He turned away. Don't ask.

'Dada, look at me. What happened?'

He turned back. Sorry.

His eyes started to glow bright green, the one that matched his mouth. It was glowing brighter by the second. I knew what this meant. I knew what he was going to do. I knew that he could do this. But why now?

'No Dada, don't do this to me, just answer me!' it glowed brighter, 'No Dada! Don't do this now!' 

He's whole body glowed the same green that appeared in his eyes, green fog surrounded him and within seconds, he's gone. He had jumped to another location. 

I was puzzled. I knew that Dada was a jumper but he would only jump if he felt uncomfortable. Uncomfortable? Why would he feel uncomfortable. I decided to look and Dada's sketchpad, he'd draw whatever he felt. Usually he'd draw smiley faces, or both of us walking hand-in-hand. But as I flipped the pages, I saw something different. It was drawn today.

It was a picture of Dada, with five other toki's looking like him, but they all had different colours. Blue, red, pink, yellow and white. They were all playing with each other, enjoying themselves, having a great time. They were on some barren land that I had never seen before. And at the most bottom right of the page, Dada wrote: When will you come?

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sapphirefrogeggs13
286 streak #1
Chapter 3: I'm a little confused, but enjoying this so far! I'll come back to read more :0
Cassi_cool22 #2
Chapter 10: This is not borig at all!!! probably the best matoki fic I've read!! and trust me I have read a lot and looked for a lot too but they were all one shots that left me wating more but were completed this fic also leave me wanting more but it is not finished! continue it whenever you feel like it or when you have more insperation for it! it doesn't have to become a fic! On the contrary it makes it even better and m ore realistic if you have one gay caracter! Sometimes I read fics and everybody in the group are gay and sometimes I can't help but think what are the odds that 6 men are placed in the same group and they are all gay? but with one or two it makes it more realistic! even if the matokis and power is not supposed to be realistic but it makes it eve more interesting!! okay I'm gonna shut up now... I know it's been a while but I know how you feel about this fic but if you don't feel like finishing it I won't be mad! because I know that if you don't feel like finishing a story but you force yourself to finish it, it's not going to be as good as you want it to be. Anyway, just wanted to say that I love this fic but I won't hold it against you if you decided not to finish it!
lilaclemonade
#3
- still looking for a coauthor, please message me -
ozwalkr #4
Chapter 10: This is in NO WAY boring! I love what you have done by integrating the matokis into the story. BAP was awesome in concert in Dallas btw. Just cause you are feeling another storyline right now, don't delete this. The real reason you are slower to get votes for this one is cause a HUGE portion of the AFF fanbase is all about EXO. Thats all well and good, but I prefer my BAP and Big Bang... I really hope you consider doing this justice. Its a good start to something that could be great.
avylol08
#5
Chapter 10: *blink blink* that was amazing..... Sudden surprised me but that was awesome xD Daehyuns got some issues lol he almost suddenly seemed like a possessive girl xD which reminds me! Isn't keke the one that looks like a girl under his suit? Lol that's ironic xD this really is an awesome story lol
stephani_bap #6
Chapter 10: anyway i'm new reader^^
stephani_bap #7
Chapter 10: WOW! i really LOVE this story unnie! please, don't delete this story coz i want to read it until the end. i'll upvote this story and subscribe because i love it!!^^
Fantasja
#8
Chapter 10: You have my sword! And my bow! And my pen with an ink!
I know the feeling of being at lost with inspiration - which author doesn't - so keep your promise, and don't force anything stupid. IM is great and the lack of response may be due to, at least in my case, rarer checking aff.
I also like your flow of keeping this story away from the gay, I mean.. It's not this often to see main story line concetrated around adventure without much influance of love-like-interactions. You're great for doing that.
And about dreams - I'm hard Daehyun stan, but from time to time I dream about Youngjae. It happened to me twice already and I find it weird, but that doen't bring me away from Daehyun, so.. Doesn't dreaming about your bias doesn't make you any less stan of him/her.
I love you, precious, don't matter "which fandom is your main fandom".
hyunhyun95
#9
Chapter 9: Hey. I'm a new reader here. Your story is awesome... Update soon~~
AshXIII #10
Chapter 9: Oooh, update. (rubs hands together mischievously) And do my eyes deceive me.....DaeDae's having the hots for JongUppie...even better. (chuckles)