Title of the story: Lessons From Cupids
Story URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/LFC
Author of the story: Nicole Colene Chua
Reviewer: Amaliya from Fairytale Fantasies (www.fairy-tale-fantasies.blogspot.com)

Title: 3/5
Comments: The title is interesting and it makes me curious to know what the story is about. It matches some parts of the story well… Maybe a title that was a bit more related to Chun and Ella would have been better, but I think the title is interesting.

Appearance: 4/5
Comments: I really like the poster and background. The color fits together well and the text is clear and easy to read. Though I don’t really know why it’s Gui Gui that’s on the background…? Well I like it anyway. ☺

Forewords: 10/10
Comments: I like the forewords. I think it’s good that you have written a bit about the main characters so people will get an expression of the persons and therefore they can better understand them. The synopsis is interesting and at the same time a little bit fun. It really awakens my curiousness and interested in reading it.

Plot: 12/15
Comments: The plot is interesting and fun. Though there is quite a few fanfics where they hate each other at first and then it turns into love… But I still think it’s ok.

Originality: 17/20
Comments: I haven’t seen many fanfics like this; though the hate-love thing is common I still think you make it interesting. ^-^

Grammar/Spelling/punctuation/vocabulary: 13/15
Comments: There’s not that many grammar mistakes, but there is a few spelling mistakes though I don’t think that it’s many. :D

Details: 4/5
Comments: I really like the way you described their tour around Paris and how you describe the walk with all the things they see. It’s almost like walking there myself. Just one question, are you by any chance from France or you just researched a bit? ;)

Writing style: 9/10
Comments: I really like your writing style.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Comments: I enjoyed reading your fanfic, though I’m not the biggest GuiLun fan, but I like the ChunElla pairing and the story was really nice and fun. I really liked how Chun and Ella had no idea about love and read how their relationship developed. Keep up the good work!~

Bonus: 5/5
Total: 85/100